What’s wrong with the translations????

It sucks....big time. Maybe bcoz english is ur second that's why it doesn't bother u.

english is my first language and its not even that bad. yes it doesnt make sense at some phrases but u can still get the gist of it tf

Honestly I think it is okay but the problem is that there are incorrect grammars/words that makes the sentence a bit weird.

Ahhh I make a lot of grammar mistakes when I wrote but when I read I self consciously add in those punctuations if that makes sense

it sucks bruh. word choices were wrong, grammar were off and even if i could understand the gist of it, it's because of the art and certain words. individual words, not sentence.

if i'm gonna be honest, between the raws and this, the dialogue clarity out of 10 is only a 3.

Nah English is my second language but I speak it daily. Well enough to write an essay in English

but if yall could understand it then good for you. you've got a good level of comprehension and maybe even patience to be able to say such nice words.

really, i admire yall for that coz i can't, for the life of me, sugarcoat no shit to save my ass. yall are such nice human beings.