I feel like the author fucked up really bad. I went to reread certain and things just to check it out a bit and reread some of the comments and I’ve come to the conclusion. The author just didn’t know where to take the story after her resolution. why are you bringing back a plot that has already been semi resolved it doesn’t have to be completely resolved, but she already had that development. She could still feel anxious feelings and that still would’ve been OK, I felt like the author just didn’t know how to properly do it. I don’t know. I don’t know what the hell they were going for, but it was clearly not this. If it were up to me, the second plot point of the story, would’ve been her trying to find her Into a little bit of trouble like that maybe even having more development as a character that makes sure a very strong character. The story is cliché, but it was good until that point where her development literally meant absolutely fucking nothing could even been about her developing where she came from because she literally should’ve been what were they counts or something, they should’ve swallowed that. Oh, I care about the people there still. If they had done, that would’ve been nice, but I get that because the romance was no longer there like development of the romance. The author was like oh no, let’s just make her stupid.
I feel like the author fucked up really bad. I went to reread certain and things just to check it out a bit and reread some of the comments and I’ve come to the conclusion. The author just didn’t know where to take the story after her resolution. why are you bringing back a plot that has already been semi resolved it doesn’t have to be completely resolved, but she already had that development. She could still feel anxious feelings and that still would’ve been OK, I felt like the author just didn’t know how to properly do it. I don’t know. I don’t know what the hell they were going for, but it was clearly not this. If it were up to me, the second plot point of the story, would’ve been her trying to find her Into a little bit of trouble like that maybe even having more development as a character that makes sure a very strong character. The story is cliché, but it was good until that point where her development literally meant absolutely fucking nothing could even been about her developing where she came from because she literally should’ve been what were they counts or something, they should’ve swallowed that. Oh, I care about the people there still. If they had done, that would’ve been nice, but I get that because the romance was no longer there like development of the romance. The author was like oh no, let’s just make her stupid.