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Ch. 38 Attempt at Scripting Part One

Green Emerald August 3, 2017 12:28 pm

Apparently there's a character limit & the script I've prepared exceeds it (Two failed attempts at posting). So we'll do this in TWO batches~

EDIT: Turns out I spammed the place 'cause when I woke up there were like 5 repeat posts.. so I had to take the extras down.. I apologize to those who took the time to comment.. feel free to share your thoughts on this one since it's complete.

First & foremost; I ask that anyone willing to proof-read please do so in order to make sure the material comes across properly. Looking forward to the official translation, be it here or Lezhin (probably Lezhin for me).

& please disregard all of the grammatical errors.. there are so many o.o but I stopped caring.. I just wanted to get this up the soonest possible as promised for y'all >.<

Here you guys go~

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Lucaon WHILE HOLDING ONTO KYON'S SHOULDER: (LSB) What is the reason? Answer me.

Kyon, WIDE-EYED: (KSB) .....

(KSB) I...,

Ryan, CUTS INTO THE CONVERSATION FROM BEHIND KYON & PLACES HIS HAND ON KYON'S SHOULDER: (RSB) He's scared.

(RSB) Ever since the recent attack against the mansion,

(RSB) He's been constantly anxious.

Lucaon: (LSB) ... Because of that?

(LSB) Anything else?

Ryan, ALL THE WHILE NOT BREAKING EYE CONTACT WITH KYON IN ORDER TO MAINTAIN A MATTER OF SUGGESTION: (RSB) It's like this. (What Ryan says here is incomprehensible to me.. but I believe it's about everyone who has left.. because the situation is bad & Kyon's thoughts about possibly leaving too. Please, anyone feel more than free to take the reigns on what Ryan says. I'm very curious to know~)

(RSB) Isn't that right?

Kyon, WHILE LOOKING DOWN: (KSB) .....

Lucaon: (LSB) Is that all?

(LSB) That's what you've been trying to tell me?

Kyon: (KSB) Right. It was just hard to do.

(KSB) And I...,

NOT ABLE TO LOOK LUCAON IN THE EYES, KYON CONTINUES, (KSB) Here, the shirt was torn as a result of the attack.

(KSB) The one given to me by Master.

(KSB) There was a lot of blood. I got rid of the blood stains, but the clothes were hurt. I can't return it back to you.

TURNING HIS BACK TO LUCAON, KYON STARTS TO WALK AWAY, (KSB) I'm sorry...

Lucaon, LEFT SPEECHLESS: (LSB) .....

(he's reaching out towards Kyon guys.. I'm in tears TT^TT )

(Second to last panel for this scene leaves us bearing witness to Kyon's profile. Tears welled up, lips trembling.. the last panel shows us Ryan, whose head is turned in sympathy towards Kyon.. saying nothing.. but surely thinking lots.. (though it isn't shared with we, the audience)

-- Cut Scene --

Cecilia: (CSB) Are you coming?

(CSB) It looks like you just came back from having a serious discussion.

FISTS CLENCHED, Lucaon: (LSB) It was not a big deal.

Cecilia: (CTB) It looks like his condition is worsening.

(CTB) I think he's worried that Kyon will quit

LOOKING BACK IN THE DIRECTION FROM WHICH LUCAON CAME,(CTB) .....

-- Cut Scene --

Kyon, VOICE TREMBLING: (KSB) But...,

(KSB) I can't say that.

DESPERATELY, WHILE CLUTCHING TO RYAN, TEARY-EYED, (KSB) Please help me.

(KSB) You can help me.

(Ryan only stares passively & rather apathetically.. taking in Kyon's desperation. -The reason I use apathetically here though it sounds rather harsh is because no matter how much Kyon may be against leaving the mansion.. & no matter how many points may be presented in favor of his staying.. Ryan has already decided that Kyon has to leave. It's not something up for discussion.. therefore he seems very indifferent to Kyon's cries for help-)

(KSB) I'll stay calm. And...

(KSB) If anything happens, I'll do whatever it takes

ANXIOUSLY, LAYING EVERYTHING BARE IN HOPES OF RECEIVING A POSITIVE SIGN FROM RYAN, (KSB) Whatever it takes.. to get rid of my master.


Ryan, CATCHING KYON BY HIS WRISTS: (RSB) Calm down, Kyon.

(RSB) This is not a matter of your own choosing.

(RSB) You're here right now..

IRRITATED, Kyon: (KSB) Don't be ridiculous.

(KSB) Aren't you giving up too easily?

BLACK TEXT, I'M ASSUMING KYON RAISES HIS VOICE HERE, (KSB) There must be a w-!

RYAN SILENCES KYON BY PLACING HIS HAND OVER KYON'S MOUTH..

CALM & COLLECTED, Ryan: (RSB) Stop. You're very agitated.

HAND STILL PLACED IN ORDER TO KEEP KYON SILENT, (RSB) Kyon, it's been a decade since Lucaon lost his family,

KYON IS KEPT MUTE, CLUTCHING ONTO THE HAND THAT'S CURRENTLY GRABBING HIM BY THE MOUTH.. (RSB) I thought he needed someone to comfort him after his disappearance.

(RSB) So Far I thought it would be a servant.

(RSB) But that is no longer what you simply are.

(RSB) I do not want to entertain the idea of the dangers that would come about at the risk of keeping you around,

RYAN LOOSENS HIS HOLD ON KYON (RSB) You talk about doing something,

KYON'S TREMBLING, (RSB) But I don't want to rile up Lucaon's trauma even more.

(RSB) You don't understand the situation between you & your master enough to act like you possess the strength needed to endure.

STONE-FACED, RYAN BOLDLY STATES, (RSB) If you insist on being obstinate , I'll drive you out of here.

KYON LOOKS BACK IN HORROR, (RSB) Do you understand?

-- Cut Scene --

(Kyon is running down the hall, he passes Cecilia without even the slightest glance her way. Cecilia only stares back in observance. -Putting two & two together here, Cecilia runs into Kyon after he dashes out from the room where Ryan is. Cecilia then goes inside.-)

WHILE COMING IN, Cecilia: (CSB) Are you afraid of him? <<<< This is more her talking to herself about Ryan possibly? I'm not really sure..>>>

-Unbeknownst to Cecilia, Ryan is found inside sitting on a chair.-

UPON REALIZING, Cecilia: (CSB) Oh..., Ryan.

DOOR AJAR

(CSB) Are you angry?

WAVING OFF, Ryan: (RSB) Not at all.

(CSB) You look irate.

(CSB) Don't put too much pressure on Kyon.

RYAN, PER HIS USUAL GENTLENESS SHOWN ON HIS PROFILE

(CSB) It wouldn't be the best for Lucaon right now to know that Kyon will be leaving here.

POSITIVE PROFILE, Cecilia, (CBS) If we put our heads together we will surely save Lucaon.

(CBS) So let's ease up a little.

Responses
    Green Emerald August 3, 2017 3:14 am

    Part two:

    -- Cut Scene --

    KYON & CECILIA'S SERVANT?? ARE HAVING A CONVERSATION IN THE HALL.

    Kyon : (KSB) Are you going to work here?

    <<<<I forgot this chick's name. Did they even tell us?? Welp.. we'll call her Phoebe..>>>>

    STRAIGHT FACED, Phoebe (PSB) Yes. Since it takes time to gather the employees,

    (PSB) I've come to help you first.

    THE NEXT PANEL SHOWS A CLOSE UP OF PHOEBE'S EYE..

    --START FLASHBACK--

    CECILIA & PHOEBE ALONE

    Cecilia: (CSB) It's been decided that Kyon will be leaving but it's going to take some time to implement.

    (CSB) I want you to keep an eye on him for a while before you're assigned anything else.

    (CSB) Since you're good at observation, I'm confident you'll do well. Do me this favor.~

    (PSB) Yes.

    --END FLASHBACK--

    LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW, Phoebe, (PSB) The snow is here early.

    (PSB) Because we're in the mountains it's colder up here.

    KYON WALKS RIGHT PAST, NOT ACKNOWLEDGING PHOEBE'S ATTEMPT AT MAKING CONVERSATION. PHOEBE IS LEFT STARING AT A SOLEMN PROFILE FROM THE BACK.

    <<<<<<<<<I JUST NOTICED KYON HAS LEFT EVERYONE STARING IN THIS CHAPTER SO FAR.. VERY DEPRESSING.. POOR GUY.>>>>>>>

    --Cut Scene--

    **(Cecilia through Phone) How's it going?

    (PSB) Kyon hasn't allowed much to observe.

    (PSB) He hasn't eaten much in these four days.. he stays in a constant state of absent-mindedness... & stumbles about his tasks.

    (PSB) He's surprised by small sounds.. like the wind.. and doors.

    PANEL SHOWS KYON HOLDING ON TO HIMSELF WHILE WALKING DOWN THE HALL.. UNSETTLED.

    (PSB) It was great when we finally received a visitor <<SIHAN>> Thoough Kyon looked a little troubled..

    (PSB) After speaking to him, he seemed more calmed.

    (Cecilia through Phone) & Lucaon?

    PANEL SHOWS LUCAON'S COLD GLANCES TOWARDS PHOEBE.

    (PSB) Lucaon, he looks at me as if I were trash.

    (PSB) Maybe it's because I'm a servant.

    (Cecilia through Phone) Really? Is it bothering you?

    (PSB) No. Its okay, but ...

    (PSB) Master I'd like you to comer here today.

    (Cecilia through Phone) To stay there?

    CECILIA, working at desk (Cecilia through Phone) There's not much I can do there. I need to research what I can about Kyon.

    (PSB) About Kyon...

    KNIFE SHOWN, HOVERING OVER VEGGIES.

    (PBS)I feel a little bad for him.

    KYON, EXPRESSIONLESS HOLDS UP HIS FINGER. HIS EYES ARE EMPTY.

    (PSB) Too...

    (PSB) Quiet...

    KYON ACCIDENTALLY? <<PLEASE DON'T BE SUICIDAL KYON>>> NIPPED HIS FINGER.

    PHOEBE HEARS CONVERSATION FROM OUTSIDE DOOR** <<This is the end of the phone call>>

    Sihan: (SSB) Kyon-- I'll be going back now.

    KYON LOOKS TOWARDS THE DIRECTION OF SIHAN'S VOICE & CALM & COLLECTEDLY WALKS AWAY FROM THE CUTTING BOARD TO SEE SIHAN OFF.

    --Cut Scene--

    MANSION ENTRANCE, IT'S SNOWING

    Kyon: (KSB) Sihan,

    (KSB) Come back often.

    (KSB) Please continue to be kind to Master.

    PERPLEXED, Sihan: (SSB) Are you thinking about leaving here?

    (SSB) It's hard, isn't it? You look pale...

    (SSB) It must be hard to manage the house alone, but Lane (we found our girl's name) is here now.. so-

    Kyon: (KSB) Go.

    LOOKING SYMPATHETIC, Sihan: (SSB) .......

    SIHAN TURNS & TAKES HIS LEAVE.

    KYON STAYS OUTSIDE.. HANGING BY THE STEPS TAKING IN THE SNOW & HIS SURROUNDINGS.. LOST IN THOUGHT.

    THE DOOR OPENS A SMIDGE.

    VOICE: Come on in now.

    VOICE: Beacuse it's cold..

    KNOWING ALL TOO WELL WHO THIS VOICE BELONGS TO.. KYON TURNS TO FACE HIS MASTER.

    KYON: (KSB) Master.

    (KSB) I'll stop working here.











    & that's all she wrote.. it doesn't read too well & lacks consistency in some respects of organization but I hope it gets the chapter across..

    I know we all wanted Lucaon to be abandoned so that he could learn to appreciate Kyon more.. but seeing that's where we're heading.. & how much it's affecting both parties.. as well as the horrible circumstances leading up to Kyon's decision.. I don't want this. Let's just pray for a happy ending.. though the worst is still yet to come (ch.0)

    Lastly.. Kudos to DaisiesAndLilies.. they have certainly perfected the art of scripting..As for me, I'll just stick to summaries.

    Until next time~

    Anonymous August 3, 2017 4:06 am

    Oh thank you

    Anonymous August 3, 2017 7:04 am
    Part two:-- Cut Scene -- KYON & CECILIA'S SERVANT?? ARE HAVING A CONVERSATION IN THE HALL.Kyon : (KSB) Are you going to work here?<<<<I forgot this chick's name. Did they even tell us?? Welp.. w... Green Emerald

    Thanks! !!!

    Green Emerald August 3, 2017 11:12 am

    Anytime :*

    Green Emerald August 3, 2017 11:13 am
    Thanks! !!! @Anonymous

    You're so very welcome~

    Anonymous August 3, 2017 2:01 pm
    Part two:-- Cut Scene -- KYON & CECILIA'S SERVANT?? ARE HAVING A CONVERSATION IN THE HALL.Kyon : (KSB) Are you going to work here?<<<<I forgot this chick's name. Did they even tell us?? Welp.. w... Green Emerald

    thanks for your work

    Green Emerald August 3, 2017 2:04 pm
    thanks for your work @Anonymous

    You're welcome~ :)

    weed August 3, 2017 4:19 pm
    You're welcome~ :) Green Emerald

    what about 36 &37? *tear

    Green Emerald August 3, 2017 5:18 pm
    what about 36 &37? *tear weed

    Chapter 36 is available here, & there's a summary for Chapter 37 in the comments.
    Here's a link: http://www.mangago.me/home/mangatopic/2028525/

    reponce August 4, 2017 4:51 pm

    (KSB) Whatever it takes.. to get rid of my master. plesase can you explain meI didn't understand what kyon said to lucaon ?

    reponce August 4, 2017 4:54 pm
    (KSB) Whatever it takes.. to get rid of my master. plesase can you explain meI didn't understand what kyon said to lucaon ? reponce

    I mean to ryan n is it to get rid of lucaon or edwin? how he can possible do that ! both are a pure royal blood.

    Green Emerald August 4, 2017 5:30 pm
    I mean to ryan n is it to get rid of lucaon or edwin? how he can possible do that ! both are a pure royal blood. reponce

    What Kyon says here to Ryan is in reference to Edwin. He's thinking that Ryan can find a way out of this horrible situation & Kyon is offering all of himself to help. Whatever it takes may mean to get rid of Edwin or rid himself from Edwin's influence. Either/or perhaps even both. It's like a final plea 'cause Kyon understands that the safe way to handle everything would be if he simply left but he doesn't want to live without Lucaon.

    Green Emerald August 4, 2017 5:32 pm
    I mean to ryan n is it to get rid of lucaon or edwin? how he can possible do that ! both are a pure royal blood. reponce

    & you're right. I don't think it'll be that easy to go after Edwin.. he has an army behind him ffs.. so Kyon may not understand the severity of the situation 100% like Ryan does.

    reponce August 4, 2017 6:11 pm
    What Kyon says here to Ryan is in reference to Edwin. He's thinking that Ryan can find a way out of this horrible situation & Kyon is offering all of himself to help. Whatever it takes may mean to get rid o... Green Emerald

    it's winter and with kyon's memories are back I think it's at this time that kyon will cut the connection the tatto on his neck. I'm dying to know what lucaon will say or react to kyon decision to leave him...!

    Green Emerald August 4, 2017 6:35 pm
    it's winter and with kyon's memories are back I think it's at this time that kyon will cut the connection the tatto on his neck. I'm dying to know what lucaon will say or react to kyon decision to leave him...! reponce

    I'm having mixed feelings about the next chapter.. I want to know but then I don't. To be specific.. I want to know only if the outcome is positive but I don't want to know if the chapter is tragic. I'm hoping Lucaon doesn't allow him to leave.