I tried rereading it and still didn't find any appeal in the characters. There is a lack of formatting in the story as well as inconsistencies throughout the entire premise. For a story to be comprehensive, you need to have clarity, which the author clearly lacks. I can agree that the concept itself is interesting, but due to the author's poor writing skills (which is disappointing in comparison to "Pearl Boy"), it lacks any appeal.

guys is this worth reading?? I've never finished Pearl Boy so idrk the story all the well