This had so much potential but the sex just really fell flat I’m not one to police the sex (this is fantasy, I’m not a dum dum who thinks everything I read is a moral reflection of my virtues lol) — I couldn’t care less about the fact that it’s dub con but it just felt really forced rather than a natural escalation of things.
It's supposed to feel that way because IT IS FORCED!! It's supposed to feel flat and uncomfortable because it is dubcon Baby tiana
It’s not even about that, it’s just the way it’s handled. I don’t wanna read it again but it was really awkward, both in the choreography of the characters and the execution.
Like the scene could’ve been a lot shorter, and the author seemed like they were pandering to a gaze (which is consistent with the way this author handled the earlier scenes) but failed to do so.
I could care less again whether it’s hot or uncomfortable, I just want it to be done right or at least interesting enough to keep my eyes on screen. I think what’s really missing is the stakes and how it was highlighted in the first season. One chapter of that long sex scene is just a skip.
This had so much potential but the sex just really fell flat I’m not one to police the sex (this is fantasy, I’m not a dum dum who thinks everything I read is a moral reflection of my virtues lol) — I couldn’t care less about the fact that it’s dub con but it just felt really forced rather than a natural escalation of things.
Hoping the story does get better tho ╮(￣▽￣)╭
It's supposed to feel that way because IT IS FORCED!! It's supposed to feel flat and uncomfortable because it is dubcon
Second this. But I do kinda feels they look hawt
not even dubcon just straight up rape
It’s not even about that, it’s just the way it’s handled. I don’t wanna read it again but it was really awkward, both in the choreography of the characters and the execution.
Like the scene could’ve been a lot shorter, and the author seemed like they were pandering to a gaze (which is consistent with the way this author handled the earlier scenes) but failed to do so.
I could care less again whether it’s hot or uncomfortable, I just want it to be done right or at least interesting enough to keep my eyes on screen. I think what’s really missing is the stakes and how it was highlighted in the first season. One chapter of that long sex scene is just a skip.