Honestly i agree, the constant sex made it nearly impossible to really get into knowing the characters themselves and the rest of their lives.
such a waste
you're so right. as cute as the story is, there were so many plot points i could see going somewhere but didn't because of the amount of sex scenes. we could've done with a few more chapters for the plot which would make this story way better than it is for me
100% if you want to write straight up porn don't throw out so many interesting plotlines and hint at character complexity （/TДT)/
it's very cute, but i feel like so much was set up that they didn't do much with and just ended up having sex instead. Like the whole he needed the scholarship - but then he didn't. Js not feeling happy about getting first and thinking about that for like half a second when it could've been very introspective. All the bullying... like he had panic attacks and was scared and it never really was resolved imo... like sure he got a little more confident, but just a little fewer sex scenes could've given way to more character development and interaction :')
i guess i just expected to wallow in angst and connect with the characters mores since i felt like that's how it was set up.