There were a lot of details missing and parts of the story were rushed. There was a lack of plot building and climax points of the story. I think it is because it was intended to be a shorter story so the author probably had to cut corners to make it under 100 chapters. But I think the story itself was ok, of course it could have been better with more connecting details and filling in the holes of the plot. But if you want to read something short and don’t usually analyze what you’re reading then this should be a decent read for you. Personally, I read for the plot so I would give this a 4.5~5-10
There were a lot of details missing and parts of the story were rushed. There was a lack of plot building and climax points of the story. I think it is because it was intended to be a shorter story so the author probably had to cut corners to make it under 100 chapters. But I think the story itself was ok, of course it could have been better with more connecting details and filling in the holes of the plot. But if you want to read something short and don’t usually analyze what you’re reading then this should be a decent read for you. Personally, I read for the plot so I would give this a 4.5~5-10