ch 98 and more
Myeah... this is underwhelming. The story boast about the conflict, the antagonist and the villains like some big things of a dealz but in the end they solved it half-heartedly. Like, the author just laid it bare with no whatsoever thoughts or hidden intentions which is a meh in an angsty fantasy story. I want a big reveal of twist, i want an unrivaled antagonist, i want a depressed beyond-well yet strong and undefeated FL, i want a great downfall of the villainess, AND most likely a devoted yearner ML. But, this story doesn't give me much impact, despite all the potentials. Shame:(
I wonder if the artist was sick and cannot prolong this project or it was already styled like this in the novel...
see what i mean? The author really wants to make a different story the untypical and definitely not something cliché. But it's just came out unnatural and forced like a pick me type of story
Adalins Ablisine is definitely a pick me. Wdym you don't know how to love and to be loved and you will befitting the role of the villainess until the end????? Girlll you're not some "i'm not like the other girls" girl nor a psychopath born without empathy. You're just a nuisance who had no backbone.
at this point... what's the point of reading the side stories? i alr know they'll part for quite some times and then the duke valentino will come back to her, win her hearts, and in the end they'll be back together for the happily ever after.
Do i really need to read 3-5 chapters to saw that happened?
the more i read, the more it becomes unrealistic and inorganic. i kinda get it why this story have lower rating than it deserves.
At first, the amnesiac arc and the misunderstanding prt looks legit and well planned despite the fast-paced. But as the story reaching the runaway arc, it becomes more and more dull and kinda rushed. I mean, it would be more satisfying if the runaway arc and the revenge arc got dragged a little to build up more tension and emotion.
But nah.... they chose to rush everything: FL Made a contract with spirit, planned a revenge, get revenge, and there, done. Everything's get back on it's place.
All that plot also doesn't help with the FL who always made an excuse like "it's fine, let's get it over now. I made a contract with somnia, let her handle everything. i'll use her power to lurk into everyone's mind and go berserk, even tho that power strained my body and soul, i'll soon divorced the pathetic ML too in the end." LIKE... OK Gurl, so what's the plan??? Hello author or artist... What's THE plan????? Is that it all you can give? Can't you get more creative and imaginative with executing her plan? It's underwhelming.
After all that suffering and hardship, i would like to think she sharpened her mind and be more thorough with her plan to get revenge on Everrets. It's only fair to make her revenge arc even more interesting and complicated for us readers.