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unpopular opinion but the story would have been 10x better if it didn't stray much from th...

hanasun July 12, 2026 6:25 pm

unpopular opinion but the story would have been 10x better if it didn't stray much from the og timelime, the middle-end part was esp messy and kinda unnecessary at points, but still decent story overall.

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    i love men with neck tattoos August 14, 2026 1:06 am

    This story doesn’t get many readers anymore seeing as how this comment is from a month ago… but I wanted to share my opinion and say that I felt as if the OG timeline (past life) was slowly being forgotten. As if it’s almost like a dream? Like how a lot of reincarnation stories talk about how you rarely remember your past life..