Could this artist go take storytelling lessons and re do this manhwa from the beginning? O...

i think its just a reader error .. makes sense to me

Mangago deleted the rest of my comment after the emoji I put after those lines ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ it was only a critique because I do like the concept of this manhwa, I'm interested in the characters' past and I like their dynamic. But the pace is very clunky, the dialogues feel empty, not just vague, they feel empty and sometimes the cuts are too abrupt. There are ways to make this feel like an amnesiac patient's POV, and I don't think there's anything wrong with saying that the author is probably a beginner since the art so far is better than the script. There were other users that said they didn't like the sex scenes because there was no chemistry/feelings/connection, and I actually liked those scenes because MC technically didn't feel anything for ML at that moment, he was just trying to find a human connection. That showed potential, and again, I don't think there's anything wrong to point out some flaws we see.