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What is this garbage

Octavia34 August 7, 2026 9:02 pm

Honestly, for the first 4 chapters I wasn't even really sure what the fuck was happening. Is it just terrible translation? It felt like jumping from thing to thing to thing with no explanation. I was wondering if pages hadn't loaded or if chapters were missing. It was jarring. And what everyone was saying just wasn't making sense, not to mention I could scarcely figure out who was talking. If it wasn't for the images I'd have been 10000% lost in what was happening.

So yea, that alone makes me say that this story is trash. I mean, absolute dog shit writing and pacing. Then you throw on what the story actually is, and yea, it's disgusting. I'm not surprised its rating is in the low 8.0s but honestly, I wouldn't be surprised to see it down in the 7.0s.

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    Octavia34 August 7, 2026 9:08 pm

    Also I need to add that the first 4 chapters and the rest of this felt like 2 different stories. Cuz he "saved" the omega in chapter one and that was clearly when they had just met, then almost immediately he had to move away and didn't see him again until college, but then in chapter 5 the author acted like they had been the best of childhood friends?????????????? Lots of shared memories, his mom is talking about the omega like she was very familiar with him, she had a box filled with letters from him, the MC says that the boy communicated with him just through these notes as if they had spent so much time together??????? That doesn't line up at all with chapter 1 or how he seems to barely recognize him at all when meeting again years later.
    Idk, just such a disjointed story.