In their first sex scene, where JinWoo is paranoid that DaeHan is just playing with him, he says he's 'acting shameless' and in the official he straight up calls him a slut
And the too literal thing is in random dialogues, the first one that comes to my mind is the Korean expression when someone is bothering another person, the official put 'do you have a death wish?' when it's two friends speaking (way too formal imo) where BLSesam put 'wanna die?'.
Idk, it just feels meh.

I'm rereading and there are some things from the official translation that are pissing me off. It feels too literal and it makes JinWoo look like an asshole... I'm gonna miss BLSesam's translation so much