Story is a very poorly written receptacle for smut. The plot has so many holes, the writing is so non sensical, the scene building is so ridiculous, the characters so unconvincing, the research so lacking, it reads like when a five year old tries to write for grown ups.
Story is a very poorly written receptacle for smut. The plot has so many holes, the writing is so non sensical, the scene building is so ridiculous, the characters so unconvincing, the research so lacking, it reads like when a five year old tries to write for grown ups.