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I've struggled to get to chapter 60

Octavia34 September 18, 2026 2:42 am

Summary: Absolutely no logic to anything and has snail pacing.

Lets face it, everything that has happened this far could have easily been done in 20 chapters or less. This story suffers strongly from a slow pacing issue. The author is needlessly struggling to draw this out as some sort of mystery suspense, but theyve missed the balance and it just drags.
That doesn't even touch on all the bullshit this story just expects you to over look. Haeil is the absolute worst kept secret ever. Our MC smol boi literally just walks into his tank room willy nilly the very first chapter. The ML constantly hurts people and doesn't even attempt to hide and were supposed to think that no one knows about him?
He's an orca that can change into a human but no one is researching him anymore? He's just been left in a room almost entirely unsupervised? Bull.
An INTERN with absolutely no aquatic mammal handling training is being put in charge of feeding the most dangerous aquatic mammal known to man? Again, unsupervised??? Bull.
He can change into a human but for some reason everyone is acting like he needs a massive tank or the ocean?????????????????
They just let him walk out of the research facility utterly unchecked?????? He could have just, ya know, never returned.
MCs dad freaks out when he hears his son is employed at Marine and shows up at his door, says fucking nothing and then leaves. Like why did you even show up bro? Na,better to just walk away leaving your son in the dark about something you're clearly terrified of and just let God knows what happen to him. (This entire scene literally did not need to be in this story at all)

Just, nothing really makes sense is this story, which might explain why this is the first story is probably 15 years that I have zero idea what's going to happen because there is absolutely nothing here that follows any line of logic. But in 60 chapters all that's happened is MC finds out that ML is the orca and shapeshift. Then realizes he's an orca he met in his forgotten past (because of course, the world's absolute worst over used trope). The ML is a non-adjusted man child who hospitalizes and kills people over minor infractions. MCs dad and the CEO used to work together but there was clearly some sort of falling out. And that's about it.

60 chapters for incoherent slop. Why does this have such a high rating? And I wish they'd draw an orca in all its Majesty instead of this ugly cutsey version. Can't they draw it seriously even once? What a disservice to one of the oceans most fearsome predators.

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