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UNPOPULAR OPINION BEWARE. POTENTIAL TRIGGER. Hailynn is a failure of a MAIN CHARACTER, bo...

Hildegarde November 26, 2020 2:45 am

UNPOPULAR OPINION BEWARE. POTENTIAL TRIGGER.

Hailynn is a failure of a MAIN CHARACTER, borderline Mary Sue. A barbie doll. Why? Because the author oversold her 'adorable-ness' completely, to the point that it's everywhere. How people can compare her to Athy from WMMAP is beyond me. Athy has more character development in one finger than Hailynn has in all 24 chapters. Athy makes her young self believable, even though there's an adult inside.

Here, you would think with the mages introduction, we can get their background. But no, the first thing the mages literally did was to point out Hailynn's adorable, and fanboys the way she walks. LIKE WHO ARE THEY? Do their characters exist just to show us she's cute? Her father's advisor thinks she's adorable. WHY DO YOU ALWAYS POINT IT OUT. Every people want her. More emphasis is place on her hair and clothes instead of giving her character development she desperately needs. She gets full page spreads on her hair and clothes, and her thoughts are dumbed down to a baby's, which is actually ok, she's a trauma victim or so I like to believe. But where's the trauma? I want to see how she deals with her past and why she's talking and thinking the way she is now. But all I can see is the author putting more effort into her clothes and braided hair and she can't seem to close her mouth.

Responses
    alpacajesus November 26, 2020 7:37 am

    i wouldn’t go as far as a failure of a mc, but she does get on my nerves sometimes. it’s only 20 chapters in so we might get some development later. and yes, she is a trauma victim. she barely received any education in her teen/adult years so it explains why she’s so naive and stupid. however, i definitely agree with your point where the author tries too hard to make her a “mary sue” and that characters exist just to point out how cute she is. but i believe most shoujo daughter/father stories have mary sue mcs (leslie from contract daughter or smth, tho she does sorta get her development later) it is wut it is ┗( T﹏T )┛

    i’ll probably continue reading tho, the art is cute

    jaeshin November 26, 2020 8:48 am
    i wouldn’t go as far as a failure of a mc, but she does get on my nerves sometimes. it’s only 20 chapters in so we might get some development later. and yes, she is a trauma victim. she barely received any ... alpacajesus

    agree to this. though to say what being a failure of an mc means when mc really just means main character lol but im reading since shes kinda cute and most of my manhwas are on breaks

    Evergreen November 26, 2020 11:57 am

    Omg omg please PLEASE share your thoughts on Lady Baby, because compared to that this is bearable

    RASHOMON BRR BRR November 26, 2020 1:37 pm
    Omg omg please PLEASE share your thoughts on Lady Baby, because compared to that this is bearable Evergreen

    true, lady baby is the worst

    alpacajesus November 26, 2020 4:23 pm
    Omg omg please PLEASE share your thoughts on Lady Baby, because compared to that this is bearable Evergreen

    lmfoaoao factsss i hated how everyone coddles her and the story is just her being a genius baby. i dropped it bc it was so boring.

    Evergreen November 27, 2020 9:23 am
    lmfoaoao factsss i hated how everyone coddles her and the story is just her being a genius baby. i dropped it bc it was so boring. alpacajesus

    So glad I'm not the only one, I was beginning to think everyone in the comments section there wad blind

    PotatuChuu November 27, 2020 5:22 pm
    So glad I'm not the only one, I was beginning to think everyone in the comments section there wad blind Evergreen

    yeah like there's already 108 ch. yet she's still a kid. maybe it will take another 200 ch for her to become an adult.

    PotatuChuu November 27, 2020 5:23 pm
    yeah like there's already 108 ch. yet she's still a kid. maybe it will take another 200 ch for her to become an adult. PotatuChuu

    mi bad 103*