UGGGGH THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!! SO HEALTHY!!!! SO CUTE!!!! SO AMAZING!!!!! IT JUST HITS ALL THE SPOTS MAN
I stopped Reading this when things got toxic, so now that everyone is losing their minds can anyone explsin to me what happend and if now its worth reading? I dont mind spoilers
Horror that's what happened
The Sisyphus in the title got realized. To be honest, its only going to get more toxic but its well worth the read.
This is so good and fun, i just wish It was longer. There are still things that need to be adressed. Like the hero's lifespan and how much of It was shortened, their relationship still has room for development and maybe there could be something about a jorney of making the hero live longer. Still this is totally worth reading
I read this expecting something good because of the comments but no, the rating of this already speaks for itself. It's really shallow, like really really shallow. We have no reason as to why the guide liked MC and MC likes the guide just because of his dependency. Also MC truly is simply an asshole, he burned someone's arm that had nothing to do with the situation and it was on *purpose*. Sure he burned the guides face by mistake, he burned the other places by mistake, but at the end of the day he's still an immature ass, because of his anger he burned someone else even though he claims to have never wanted to hurt anyone, he reminds me of those ppl that put the blame of their actions on trauma, trauma is an explanation NOT and excuse nor justification. Another thing is their relationship never really developed, the guide kept saying nice things to the MC and that's it
6.5/10
Damn i took a break from this story when MC was confessing and shit, came back to read the latest chapter and he's imprisoned??? Tf happend
Went to see what chapter I stopped at, IT WAS 6 CHAPTERS AGO, TF HAPPEND IN SUCH A SHORT TIME LOL
This makes no sense and i cant even tell If its the AI translation fault or the author's fault
my guess is the ai translation. i’ve read so many other stories (with these same ai translation teams) and they literally all don’t make sense, you can tell they don’t care about if it’s legible or not. it sucks.
A 35 year old with a 17 year old???? Yeah I get it, they won't be having anything going on until the ML is an adult but it still gives me weird vibes
Right???? There was literally no reason to make their age gap this big
This story was so fun and interesting at the start, idk what the fuck happend with the author for them to ruin characters that had a nice personality and consistancy. Somewhere along the way it all went downhill, be It the inconsistency of the MC and ML, the annoyingly amnesia plot that kept always coming back or the confusing timeline.
My thought process as i kept reading:
Ch7: yikes the mf he deleted is a dead friend/ex lover, isnt It?
Ch12: she's genuinely funny omg
Ch14: LMAOOO im loving the MC!! He actually has a personality and stands his ground! And tbh me too MC.. me too (about him grabbing ML's titties
Ch17: uuughh the chibbis are so cute!!!
Ch28: damn wtf did the author have to ruin this story???? His manipulative act is already getting too much (sure he genuinely panics sometimes but just bc he has a reason doesnt mean hes not being manipulativa) but now he forced himself on MC???? Hello? Whyyyh??????!!! This story was so good..
Ch41: yikes i was right
Ch43: wtf??????? Is the author having memory problems? Why tf are they going in circles?????? Theyre literally confessing feelings and communicating in a second but then the next theyre lying to each other to not make their true feelings known???? Does mc have alzheimer?
Ch52: ngl the cute and timid ML is growing on me, maybe even more than the puppy version of ML. Also him massaging MC's arm bc he complained It was numb was so cute
Ch53: AH HELL NAH MF YOU SCREAMED AT HIM AGAIN???? AND YOU REFUSE WALKING ON THE BEACH WITH MC????? TO BE ON YO PHONE IN THE CAR??? I TAKE BACK WHAT I SAID. YOUR PUPPY VERSION WAS A THOUSAND TIMES BETTER
Ch69: This is so ridiculous i cant help but laugh
Ch78: bitch, again???? This is so stupid
Ch82: not the It was ALL a dream trope, wtf happend to this story
Ch89: wait, why not the First time they did It? Is it bc he considers that it wasnt "him" (his version nós)? But I thought he remembered the memories from when he was 20years old in his head
Idk why i even expected anything good out of this. Another typical omegaverse story in which the alpha is good at everything but the omega is weak and bad at everything simply bc he became an omega (AND MIND YOU THE OMEGA IS KNOWN AS A FIGHTER AND GANGSTAR). Sigh... why do they always gotta have a different power dynamic? Fuck this shit
This story is really all over the place, the pacing sucks, It feels like the characters had no real development because of the pacing, It all felt forced. The one good thing about this is the art