This isn't bad, it's cute but.. it's so bland. The story has no real plot or character development. We never get to see the development of the twins relationship, neither MC's development about his knew injury and how much it affected his youth and neither we see ML's family trouble and how it affected his youth. Sure we get 1 panel out of all the things i said but that's basically nothing. This is a story I'll forget in a week
Oh wow another story where the esper is an asshole and one of the most powerful people in the world and he gets everything he wants. And wow the so original MC treats him bad and wow it's the first time someone treats ML like that so he can't help but want to be close to MC. And wow he uses his influence and power to take advantage of MC as well???? Omg this is so unique!!!!!!! (Contains irony to the ppl whom still didn't realize it)
This is funny, i had a lot of fun reading it BUT as someone who has read way too many BLs i can't help but judge the writing even if the story is fun. The MC had a lot of inconsistencies, he had a lot of trauma but he suddenly became friendly with everybody on day 2 of being in the house and not only that, he suddenly fell for ML out of nowhere too. By what he had gone through, he realistically wouldn't have trusted ML in less than a week like he did. There's also the fact ML has quite some inconsistencies too, the plan was to give MC up to his father after he signed a contract but then this fact was never addressed after some chapters, even after ML's father in fact signed it. The whole plan was so sloppy for something they had been planning for years. Also the uncle danger was nowhere near as threatening as the author tried to convey. And about ML's younger brother it feels like a last minute decision, there was never an indication of ML having a brother and he was never mentioned before, I don't mind it being a last minute change from the author but they should've made it be less sudden and abrupt. Tbh i think the author didn't really wanna make season 2. Aaaand we never got an explanation as to how illishire came to exist, sure the blessing may be a lie but how come they got a mark and can have children?? MC doesn't seem like such a good father either, he feels indifferent towards his kid. Anyway I'd still say this is worth reading, 7/10











This story is very cute and i still think it's worth reading BUT honestly i wish the author had written the plot better. I get it, it's meant to be a short manga but for 3 volumes this writing is very lacking. I feel like the fact this is an isekai had almost to no change in the plot even though it was a big part of MC's character, the way the story goes doesn't feel connected at all with the novel's story and yeah you can say it's because MC is not an asshole anymore but it wouldn't change the fact in the novel simon made the rebellion not because he cared for the king nor the royal family since he murdered them all. I also don't like the fact Leo got no punishment even though he was in on Simon's plan. Again, I still think this is worth reading but only if you want to see only relationship and no real plot. 7.5/10
Ark knew the whole novel and still didn't do much from start. He was stuck on impressing Julius whole time. You know what, i would have preferred old Ark being reincarnated or going back time kinda thing. Atleast that guy had more personality than the current one
Trueeee
A lot of stories lack the depth needed for reincarnation plot. I mean the person who was inside Ark only acted like some joyous person. Man you are going to be killed. Why are you so relaxed?? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Fr and I love reincarnation and isekai stories, it's a shame it's mostly never done well. Do you have any good recommendations?
Just use these names on this site's search:
I Can See Your Stats!
To be or not to be
Bad Friend
Summoning a BL Fan to Another World (my most favorite)
The Time a Gangster was Reincarnated as Ranmaru Mori
I'm Mediocre &, But I'm Loved in A Different World Anthology Comics
The Man in the Mirror
Doku wo Kurawaba Sara Made (a lot of trigger warnings and very little romance)
First 3 are manhwas and others are Mangas. Also manhwas don't have a lot of reincarnation concept. So I couldn't add much. Enjoy all of these ლ(´ڡ`ლ) ლ(´ڡ`ლ)