I'm not sure if it's translation issue but sometimes dialogue feels off. They talk about something and suddenly the next sentence doesn't connect with the previous one.
Also ch.2 is fully in Korean.
Sometimes characters shout for no reason. I think it was supposed to be expressive but the speech bubble suggests screaming and it is weird in a normal conversation. Also "anime style screaming" doesn't match the setting.
Physical comedy and comic relief moments do not match the vibe for me. Like the art style and theme of the story is suggesting mysterious, kinda dark (deal with the devil and all that good stuff) and than we get those chibi moments or exaggerated crying - it's probably personal preference but it ruins the vibe for me.
I was so confused when he said he's gonna START working out. Dude. You are an idol, your job is dancing one the stage and looking inhumanly beautiful. Isn't working out like... required? Like part of your daily routine?
So... The top literally didn't give a fuck about consent or communication at the beginning of the story and suddenly characters behave like they don't remember that. And for some reason they both behave as if the Sunday sex can't be avoided and has to be performed no matter what but like... Nobody is making you do it. It was an agreement between two people (if you can even call it an agreement, because it was more like abuse first few chapters), you can just stop. Like I can understand that the bottom is like "his my boss I have to do it" but the top? He is unhappy sexing the guy so why is he still sexing?
Don't get me wrong. I don't have a problem with the story being fucked up or about abusive partners or about difficulties in discovering bdsm as part of your relationship but please be consistent. You can't have him be an abusive asshole and then show exemplary communication skills and being like "let me teach you about safe bdsm" because the story is just all over the place.
I see potential here, I like parts of it, but the story as a whole just doesn't make sense to me.
I totally agree!! The story isn't consistent. This situation started as coercion. Uke didn't have a choice and it became more complicated since they're boss-employee. And now that's he's been hurt emotionally and physically abused..suddenly the topic shifted to seme opening up deeply about his bdsm kink?? If I didn't read Chapter 37, I'd honestly think ML isn't too deep into SM play but now that he explained he has a background..why tf did he treat the MC into such a play without proper consent/mutual agreement and not thru coercion?? And even leading the play to abusive treatment?? Gosh.
You know what. In the novel, he came to the realization that he took it as abuse in a different way and that part isn’t in the Manwha so I think they tried to skip over it and it really made the story not flow well
Maybe it's a cultural difference but for me this is the opposite of comedy
I'm at the beginning and I need to know so please someone tell me. Is he really a devil or is it just a "sexy title"?
Just a title
Aweeee I was hoping actual devil
With every chapter FL becomes more and more hectic and she acts as if she's going slightly crazy. At first I thought it would be just a phase for character building purpose but it drags for too long and it's such a shame
I honestly don't understand why people put so much work into making "translated" chapters knowing that the translation is incoherent. If I read it in original language I would understand probably as much as I understand now - not much.
I agree like part of me appreciates the effort and then another part is like girl too often translators don’t speak either language very well???? Like I speak English and mandarin, imagine if I translated Japanese to French?? Like why would I even attempt
I think I hate the son even more than the father. Father is at least straight forward about his intentions.
lmao yeah at least the dad's just straight up horrible, i have no questions as of why he acts up like that
this is such a disgusting take, the father is literally a pedophile and a rapist. they're not even comparable.
I know she's supposed to be innocent but sometimes she comes off as just purely stupid and it annoys me sooooo much...
innocent people are stupid. thats it lol
... I second that. And as an innocent person, I've been told that I have been masterfully oblivious when I got hit on
(=・ω・=)
Yea from another eye you’re just seen as stupid rather than innocent
I have no idea where the story is going at this point