Plot would be more interesting if fhe story was longer, so some matters can be slowly walked through. I'm not the biggest fan of age gaps, but it wasn't bothering me. Them falling in love tho looked like it was instant because of how short story is. Wish we got more of the bad guy plotting against the family since Dawn's mom rejected him and he went mad. It would be interesting for the plot. Plus entire Dawn's situation and relationship with habitans of the manor isn't well enough portrayed. A lot is missing and not adding up to other things, again because of how short it is. But overall it was nice. I really love the darkish atmosphere of older times it's set in. Bottom guy is so attractive, no wonder Dawn fell for him lol. Don't really know how to feel about the fact that he knew him as a baby (Ik they are not related and never spent time together etc, but if I were to hold a baby im my arms now and in 20+ years have him to bang me, I would feel Idk... weird)
Plot would be more interesting if fhe story was longer, so some matters can be slowly walked through. I'm not the biggest fan of age gaps, but it wasn't bothering me. Them falling in love tho looked like it was instant because of how short story is. Wish we got more of the bad guy plotting against the family since Dawn's mom rejected him and he went mad. It would be interesting for the plot. Plus entire Dawn's situation and relationship with habitans of the manor isn't well enough portrayed. A lot is missing and not adding up to other things, again because of how short it is. But overall it was nice. I really love the darkish atmosphere of older times it's set in.
Bottom guy is so attractive, no wonder Dawn fell for him lol.
Don't really know how to feel about the fact that he knew him as a baby (Ik they are not related and never spent time together etc, but if I were to hold a baby im my arms now and in 20+ years have him to bang me, I would feel Idk... weird)