At this point they are just idiotically stupid and annoying
Golden eyed dude us hiding something. Maybe I'm eternally wrong but what if he's the one who has to do something with goblin? When MC opened the portal and entered the realm where goblin was imprisoned, goblin said not everyone can enter, and why did mc had to lure him out? Is golden eyed dude is stron and can open the realm where goblin was, he could have killed him and than give mc the sphere thing (soul?) to eat. To me it seems like he wanted goblin out for some reason but wasn't able to let him out himself. Also he's a bit creepy. And was it mc's grandma with whom golden eyed guy spoke? Wasn't she supposed to be dead with the rest of his family. Hope he doesn't turn to be possesive evil bitch or whatever.
Story is so good so far! I love the action, how mc isn't some stupid crybaby and he has attitude, interaction between him and goblin are hilarious.
Sorry I cannot type without making mistakes (〒﹏〒)
Thissss
I feel like maybe he's trying to take advantage of the MC or MC's abilities somehow. Idk but definitely can't wait to see what happens next!
Can't remember when was the last time I was this curious about what's going to happened next!
Ikrr the plot is really interesting so far and characters have pretty good chemistry (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Art really improved and everything, but in ch 32 of new season size difference is still off. Bottom guy looks like literal child. Top's arm is bigger than bottom's entire body. It's so uncomfortable. Ik they both should be adults, but one looking as grow up man and the other like 20kg and 120cm proportioned child is still no..... Idk if they are doing it on purpose like in straight hentai where women are labelled as 45 years old step moms but they look like little girls with watermelon boobs so they can justify themselves for fetishism of ped0philia. Hate on me all you want, I'm not saying the art is ugly, honestly it wasn't ugly even in the beginning even tho I saw people more harassing the artist for ugly art than for drawing bottom guy looking like child and top's dick being bigger than his entire abdomen.
Story as story is dark and twisted, I'm not a fan of stalking, Stockholm syndrome, Lima syndrome, abuse etc, but for those who like it, it's totally fine, only problem is still the way they are portrayed physically. Not the art style, just the sizes of the bodies.
This entire story was so unnecessary ಥ‿ಥ ending was so rushed and lame.
They both need to talk to therapist.
For some reason this 'X-ray' of his dick inside was uncomfortable to look at (•ᴗ•)
As for the size, it's nothing new for top guys to have lethal weapons hitting their knees while they walk lol. And it looked kinda ugluly, Idk, maybe because the color and shape looks more like dildo than real thing. But it's also usual. (I'm not complaining, it was just fun seeing all yhe comments, so I just wrote mine as well)
Ugly*
The*
When he said all the good stuff and the seme face turned black and then his dick turned black like wtf was that? Like I’m enjoying the story but damn if that didn’t make my tummy hurt with the deformed stomach shots.
Omg, same! I generally don't like that stomach poking thing and the fact that top's pp can stab bottom 's lungs. But I got used to it, because it's the case in almost every single story. Not to talk about the fact that bottom guys has pp size of my pinky finger. Like if he's a bottom, it doesn't mean he's not a man *crying silently*
Plus the sentence 'Why is it getting bigger'
If I read it in one more story, I'll off myself hahhahahah. It sometimes get me wondering did the people who wrote this ever went to biology classes or saw the real pp even in the photo xD
Sorry I got to carried away with writing. I'm enjoying the story but there are genuinely scary moments.
Nah. My favorite is when they say their ass is getting wet or dripping and they haven’t used any lube or anything. Or after the top fingers the bottom and it’s all wet and stuff and then he’s holding the dudes hands and touching his face and shit. Like yeah sure it could happen but they do it to guys who don’t even know they are the bottom yet so no prep at all.. after a long day of school or work with no shower
That as well T.T
Or doing it like few hours after meal, in for example car or office, without as you pointed taking shower or doing any kind of prep. It physically hurt my brain
Right like if I’m prepared, we fucking first then eating. You’re not tricking me with you greasy ass food. Like I’m freshly showered don’t fuck with me. I’m a snack
32 chapters of very embarrassing moments.... hope we'll get some crumbs of plot and communication around 60 something chapter lol (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻
For 'something old' we can have our days together
For 'somenthing new' our future
For 'something blue' your eyes
This melted my heart ｡:ﾟ(;´∩`;)ﾟ:｡
Plot would be more interesting if fhe story was longer, so some matters can be slowly walked through. I'm not the biggest fan of age gaps, but it wasn't bothering me. Them falling in love tho looked like it was instant because of how short story is. Wish we got more of the bad guy plotting against the family since Dawn's mom rejected him and he went mad. It would be interesting for the plot. Plus entire Dawn's situation and relationship with habitans of the manor isn't well enough portrayed. A lot is missing and not adding up to other things, again because of how short it is. But overall it was nice. I really love the darkish atmosphere of older times it's set in.
Bottom guy is so attractive, no wonder Dawn fell for him lol.
Don't really know how to feel about the fact that he knew him as a baby (Ik they are not related and never spent time together etc, but if I were to hold a baby im my arms now and in 20+ years have him to bang me, I would feel Idk... weird)