I actually feel really bad for Naos this arc. Like, dude has issues, obvs. He’s the unmovable bolder of the story. And Most of his issues are because of his own stubbornness!!! Like not accepting Pania’s confession and rejecting her = all the BS with Logan we have to endure for multi chapters now ugh.
But also, he really does believe he’d make Pania’s life worse. Like, it’s not even an irrational fear, from his pov he really did ruin the life of his own family…He wants to be with her but he actually believes he’ll ruin her life…
Anyways, to end this arc with him being humiliated is very meh to me. Like I wished there was more comfort between Pania and Naos after the tentacle scene. It’s very much like “well that’s done now” but like Naos does not look with it. And like insecure with his relationship with Pania (his fault too) was kinda sad with his remark of “she must like me so much.” And the author’s commentary being like “no she’s just a perv.”
Well anyways, I just wished there’d be some heart to hearts between them at this point.
Cause Like we all know Naos is gonna run off the second he’s out of the dungeon cause that’s what he always does
Honestly, I feel like what the story needs for progression for their feelings was more of her just telling him to fuck off and going dungeon hopping with the human. If these elves didn't live for hundreds of years, they wouldn't need fifty years to come to fruition of being forced into positions to HAVE to speak their true feelings.
I hated the CNC of a monster forcing themselves onto our main characters, but it did wonders for character growth when Pania entered and was able to control the monster.
If only they could be forced to play "truth or pain" or some shit, where they'd be forced to tell each other some truths or the other person would be caused physical/emotional pain. Sexual truths and emotional truths included
I actually hate Logan cause I’m afraid he’ll SA Pania so I don’t like those two around each other at all. (Or coerce her into something sexual) (Just cause In stories like this he’d definitely be the one to assult her if there was any assult storylines)
And Naos already knows Logan is interested and pursuing her and it didn’t make a difference.
I think Pania is a bit more aware of Naos’ sexual interest now. She has commented on him being a pervert and liking certain things multiple times now. But a truth or pain would have cleared up a lot of misunderstandings around them. Cause like, Pania thinking he’ll forget her is crazy at this point in the story
She gets raped by white hair dude in the next chapter but it’s not treated seriously. He just says the knight womt want to be with her anymore cause she slept with him
Like it’s actually so ass they literally have the knight and her witch walk past each other again and if the author wanted the witch to have sex with multiple partners don’t have the white hair guy forcing himself on her and then threaten her that the knight won’t want her anymore cause he slept with her ugh
Like if you wanted to make a fetish manhwa with a girl with big boobs in love with a knight than stick to that don’t add the rape
Surprising amount of plot in this chapter. I do wonder if Pania’s “curse deletion” skill will be used for Logan’s curse. I hope he doesn’t get absolved for his murders (cause I’m a hater and I want to see him punished lmao) I want to see Pania reject him coldly like Penelope in All villains are destined to die (hah)
I feel Naos is gonna run away the second this mission is over. This is too much for him like the beginning of S2’s mission.
Also, the author posted a side comic on Twitter basically saying this scene is more of a “monkey paw” scenario and Naos doesn’t actually have these types of desires (like dub con vines I assume???) and that she worries Naos will come after her irl lol






I want this author to do Yuri