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Can someone send me the link tot he raws?

Story is adorable but the pacing is horrendous. No build-up, or let's say the build-up was generally lacking. The story is good for a light read on a tiring afternoon but not for serious engagement.

I pretend I do not see Ai and A's relationship, La la la la la la la Nope, nah, naur, zip nada zilch~~~

Going to ignore the incest and focus on the other relationships but damn I'm honestly impressed with the marketing strategies on how to manipulate propaganda in this manhua

Author could've handled that with more finesse just like how they've been doing it from the past chapters and this is just disappointing but not drop worthy knowing it'll get better, my only will is that it gets better and doesn't get toxic, Alexis has had the ability to reign his unhinged thoughts so far so I'm going to hope it can work.

I just do hope it works, I have been liking the experience so far let's hope that this doesn't become a "What if it's us" By Silvera and Albertali situation where a very much avoidable circumstance that's not even plot relevant ruined the whole story experience (and yes I'm throwing shade at that horrid book and I don't listen to opinions)

I was already annoyed before with my initial review but honestly now all of the characters are becoming flat as hell and the direction of the story doesn't seem to actually be cohesive and just adding random shit here and there, I was hoping actually hoping for a more interesting and rounded characters
(I know it's just basically starting but the start was more interesting to whatever tomfoolery this is) and a more cohesive arc but it's just all over the place at this point and Maythan's just acting like a fool. Maybe I'll try again in the future but this at the moment just raises my blood pressure.


I expected this to be a bit different since the first few chapters were intriguing but it just fell short.

Too many plot holes honestly, the start was adorable and I was liking it even though the conflict and resolution is all over the place, even the story itself was mediocre but endearingly so, however, there are so many unaddressed issues and plot holes for it to end like that because why add too many conflict and even an independent pov from the ex if the author won't expand more on it? It just felt rushed towards the end that it was borderline disappointing

From a political standpoint the prince's investigation does make sense especially since he's an heir, even though Maythan was at a place he didn't expect he still was at a wrong place in a wrong time and the Prince should be sceptical because the safety of his people are under question, is it wrong? From a personal level, yes. But as an heir he has to uphold his role for the sake of his people. One person's feeling does not matter for the sake of the whole nation e.g. utilitarianism and honestly for someone with a pragmatic disposition throughout the current chapters Maythan would've somehow understood it but it was framed to be insignificant and shallowed down because of "yaoi world magic making characters go dumb" instead of tackling it with more complexity for my liking. I'm not saying Maythan doesn't have a right to be angry but what I'm saying is that complicated situations require more work for the characters to feel more dynamic instead of making their core personality as "UwU I love you, I'm sorry I made a necessary action don't be mad

Honestly I hate idiotic MC because they make decisions with pretty bad secondhand embarrassment and usually the plot revolves around their mistake which can actually be easily avoided of they learn to think for once without jumping the gun but this one is a fun read just for keeping the stress of uni at bay.

First few chapters were icky and coercive but the progression was amazing