Lalala's Topics (11)

I’m rereading god I’m on chapter 60 furiously crying because damn if why is everyone in that family blaming my poor boy good gawd they’re all getting a few smacks AND THE BROTHER AND DAD LORD THEYRE GETTING FULL BELT TO ASS GOOD GAWD

I binge read this the whole night… I THOUGHT THIS WAS SO CUTIEEE

It’s a short lil story imo the ML isn’t flushed out enough imo and there were some points where I’m thinking hmmm why can’t they just communicate before doing the do and not do the do and then communicate YKWIM??

The top is SOOOO IN LOVE WITH THE ML and it ties in together nicely they both fell in love at first sight in their own ways. I like how the ML is just so in love with the bottom. At the start you gotta bare with the nonchalant act but I think it’s mutual in a way where it’s two characters who are navigating trying to be in a relationship.

Also the plot points they were a few brushed passes like with that really mean co worker but honestly I like this better than Love Jinx. Also I’m still on the way the Tops backstory wasn’t really talked about aside from oh bro had a glow up. Like we don’t know the top as much as we know about the MC which yes it’s how it should be but it doesn’t feel balanced at all.

I honestly just love when a top worships the ground the bottom walks on. It’s a cute story in a way that their backgrounds aren’t fleshed out and it’s more focused on the relationship between them.

I binge read this the whole night. It’s not bad but it’s not good either. Top crazy in the sort of good way where he hurting everyone that hurt the MC. Lowk it’s better than the shit nowadays where we just get bird ass fucking MCs. Like this MC got a good reason to bird out.

In the beginning there was something like I liked the kissing jinx or whatever. But why it felt like when he met the top again the jinx was highkey not that big of a mention idk if that was just me.

Then the side characters like okay we don’t expect much there but one they developed bits of stories in the beginning then sort of dropped it and let us forget about it. And the light blue haired hot guy who kissed the MC at the start his story arc seemed rushed like just a piece that needed to connect the MC to main plot points.

The top crazy asf. His family equally as crazy. So at least that’s consistent. Idk this called Love jinx so I thought there would be more harping on that but instead it was more so how the top could heal and sort of I guess get revenge for the MC of all the bad exes he had that he thought were apart of the jinx.

Like I said it’s aii… I don’t really get the hype plot wise but art wise lorrrddd everyone is mwah mwah mwah mwah very pretty art very pretty charcters main and side i want em all

The only time his crazy actually made some fucking sense. Thank you author

Bru what the helly??? It started off so good yeah some of the characters wasn’t too developed and I think it was always set up to be a short lil story.

BUT SHORT STORIES CAN HAVE GOOD ENDINGS!!!! This one was so lazy yes I expected him to not have his memory back with the regeneration shit but we needed at least 2 more chapters to answer where the hell they even are. Also the last few panels with him getting the flash backs made it seem like he was gonna get his memories back or at least keep them!

What the hell is this shit bro how’re you gonna wet my willy then leave me dry??? They tried to tie LITTERALLY NOTHING UP strings and threads every fucking where SAVE YIUR TIME BE AWARE

Like the silver haired guy who said he wanted to see mc dead we got no closure there either like what the hell?? The more I write the more I think and the more I’m ticked off BE AWARE STOP AT LIKE CH50 when he gives him that suprise smooch talkin bout sum compliments

SAVE YOURSELVES

Omfg we get it ML has a sad life yeah yeah IDGAF singing killed my grandma head ass… just get to the part where MC falls for the guilt trip already.. sm miscommunication and guilt tripping for wha

The Mc has an amazing plot to him the ML is a such a fucking weirdo. They have no chemistry. If you go into this thinking it’s a romance bro runaway. I’m on ch73 rn the ML pissed me off so bad I had to run to the comments to see if I was crazy

The MC has an interesting story but it’s so hard to tell if the ML actually likes the MC. Like the whole story he uses the MC but I can’t find an exact point where I’m like noooo he did xyz out of love. Maybe I need to finish it but I have only 26ch left I praying for a yearning arc but a yearning arc cannot be that short… right? RIGHT???

HE IS SUCH A BIRD HE THE LEADER OF THE FLOCK

I remember reading this a while back but the plot made no sense after the MC abandoned his brother (or like his fake brother???) I jump back in and it’s like MC character regressed to whatever it is now… Also what the heck is going on with the ML? Is there anywhere I could read the novel? Is it even worth it? Does this have a decent ending? I remember the first 20 or so chapters being so good the MC had so much potential to be truly complex.

Yo I feel like yall are missing the nuance. My boy is traumatized and doesn’t know how to properly contextualize his emotions thanks to his pos dad which the author does a great job at showcasing. He confuses his jealousy for hate. Like look at the context in which he was saying he went to resent the ML. It’s when he saw him with a girl when he imagined doing all the things the ML did to him to someone else. The context is more important the MC is not a reliable narrator which the author does such a good job at showcasing. The MC is so clearly misinterpreting his feelings which it isn’t the first time he would have done so. It’s clear he’s misinterpreting feelings of jealousy for hatred because he’s in a battle with himself to not care and forget about the past. Please yall read with your eyes and brains.