Its pretty choppy, the artsyle compensates some but so far slow going. The plot moved quickly so we don't really settle with the character, so far a spoiled brat with few prospects. I don't see how this can be a compelling read...?
Yk what I get it. Emotions are involved. And even though theyve been pretty shitty to eachother, what happened this chap was pretty borderline and unacceptable.
Its pretty choppy, the artsyle compensates some but so far slow going. The plot moved quickly so we don't really settle with the character, so far a spoiled brat with few prospects. I don't see how this can be a compelling read...?
Seems like the author wanted to get straight into this rapey fantasy, considering one woman on an island with a bunch of criminals. Like cmon.
What??? Is that in there..?