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Idk about the knowing him when he was 5
I know the author included it as a bit of angst and a reason for them to have a close bond in such a short story
I think that's where the trouble lies, it's so short that they only have met a couple of times and the longest time they spent together was when one of the characters was underage
I know how hard writing can be, so I'm not going to be like the author could easily have wrote more chapters to develop their relationship more
But I think the story could have been less creepy(?) if it was
Sure hopes she doesn't give her a bouquet of them when she confesses