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FL was smart but she kept changing her mind but it was done so flatly that it was just plot device. Things moved due to her wishy-washy ideas. She came in strong and smart… but all of a sudden she was just agitated throughout and while readers could say yeah that’s logical, the pacing and the storytelling didn’t allow her to earn that kind of character. Welp. Ending could have been done with better with one last chapter where she just spirals into a montage of things she could have done better to make the ending land. I see the vision but the execution was sloppy. Still was a good read to pass time.
Ok but the art style???? Yesssss