I stopped at chapter 4 cause there was so much exposition and she seemed slow in the head to me but seeing the positive comments I might try again.
She is, and yes it gets realllyyy annoying
FL was smart but she kept changing her mind but it was done so flatly that it was just plot device. Things moved due to her wishy-washy ideas. She came in strong and smart… but all of a sudden she was just agitated throughout and while readers could say yeah that’s logical, the pacing and the storytelling didn’t allow her to earn that kind of character. Welp. Ending could have been done with better with one last chapter where she just spirals into a montage of things she could have done better to make the ending land. I see the vision but the execution was sloppy. Still was a good read to pass time.
There’s one thing that keeps bugging me at the back of my mind, and it’s how bad he could have possibly smelled.
But over all I liked this!
well, you probably saw him taking a bath, right?
right because usually washing rotten meat got the smell off of it -_-
????????? WAS THAT NECESSARY (tho i think he found out they weren’t siblings and creepy dude was actually adopted not dojun) but anyway ??????
I’m glad that I read this when Chapter 29 was up. That was cute and I needed that. I get the dynamic but it was starting to feel annoying and going overboard. Chapter 29 tied it all well together and made it feel-good instead of starting to feel bad for Yuki lol