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Guys… they’re are better options out there. Why this. How did they cook more than 20 chapters of this?
Damn this plot is maddening. The protagonist is frustrating an isekai “Mary Sue”, and the MLs inspires me murder for that world to just implode. Like, which twisted god designed such thing. It’s up for failure, recipe for tragedy. And I sort of wish this could be a tragedy, because it could have been a more serious, seinen, Josei, tragedy idea.
I know that maybe to protect Amon’s dignity they may have moved away, but it’s so stupid that they went that far from the base camp when there are fricking monsters wandering around.
People doesn’t even Walt that far to pee, couldn’t ther just duel at the camp?
It’s a simple story driven by simple ideas, the issue is how it’s presented…it’s all so bare.
The “evil plan” and all. I can see why people like this…but at the same time…I can’t bring myself to like it.
It lacks that build up of mystery and thriller.
There’s that flashback form the Ferdin’s prospective, and the whole cita scene.
It’s so much that high school trope clichè. Right out of his window, and hadn’t she just enrolled recently?
It somehow broke a linearity of sort. Such choice is not always bad, take that masterpiece of a film that “Once upon a time America” by Sergio Leone is.
But in this case. That just came out of nowhere, is the author just shoving in whatever? Is…is this written with AI?
I think the translation is a little scuffed but she was always enrolled in the school, she only just recently transferred to swordsmanship classes
I think you should just wait for the official translations only I didn’t read beyond the officials (ch39) but reading this made me feel like we read different stories LOL
Oooh, that explains something.
From her initial entrance with the carriage and all, I thought it was her first time enrolling