I know that maybe to protect Amon’s dignity they may have moved away, but it’s so stupid that they went that far from the base camp when there are fricking monsters wandering around.
People doesn’t even Walt that far to pee, couldn’t ther just duel at the camp?
It’s a simple story driven by simple ideas, the issue is how it’s presented…it’s all so bare.
The “evil plan” and all. I can see why people like this…but at the same time…I can’t bring myself to like it.
It lacks that build up of mystery and thriller.
There’s that flashback form the Ferdin’s prospective, and the whole cita scene.
It’s so much that high school trope clichè. Right out of his window, and hadn’t she just enrolled recently?
It somehow broke a linearity of sort. Such choice is not always bad, take that masterpiece of a film that “Once upon a time America” by Sergio Leone is.
But in this case. That just came out of nowhere, is the author just shoving in whatever? Is…is this written with AI?
Guys… they’re are better options out there. Why this. How did they cook more than 20 chapters of this?
Damn this plot is maddening. The protagonist is frustrating an isekai “Mary Sue”, and the MLs inspires me murder for that world to just implode. Like, which twisted god designed such thing. It’s up for failure, recipe for tragedy. And I sort of wish this could be a tragedy, because it could have been a more serious, seinen, Josei, tragedy idea.
The protagonist is practically groomed by her teacher. It’s damn disgusting. Her upbringing made her quite foolish, not the kind of protagonist I prefer, in fact, it’s frustrating to see her choices.
But I can understand when you are at your lowest, you become an easy target, and that villain, practically used the cultist/scammer tactic to also isolate her.
It makes sense that she is stupid to a certain degrees, the villain, her teacher, basically groomed her that way since 9yo, makes her easier to manipulate.
Will I be reading this? I won’t. I’m not here to fell uncomfortable.
The start is a typical one of the Martial art genre. But the new take of what followed feels a little more fresh.
I’ll have this marinate for some time and come back
I’ll just add my laments to the others.
WE ARE NOT BLIND DAMMIT! THE PLOT HOLES CANNOT BE IGNORED!
they are changing mind about the kind of story they wanna write halfway.
It’s was already cool an very engaging. I understand the need to make the regression make sense— BUT WHAT THE HECK—
And THE RUSH—! Someone please contact the Manhwa artist and editors, they need to calm their horses!
Better drawings than some initial pub.
But my opinion on the story doesn’t change.
It’s a story about a rotten world with dumb adversaries.
For those that are for some heroic protagonist, you are in the wrong place.
There is no goodness here.
There’s exploitation, hoarding powers to become stronger and stronger.
The part that narrates old legends are interesting in their simple structure, as old tales are.
Whatever reason of the past, the protagonist is a ruthless sociopath now, on the alignments chart he is Evil Neutral.
Not that others are better, their are either stupid, hypocrites, or just trash that are also evil to the bone.
The protagonist get gradually OP, there will always be some negative element, downsides to some “power elements” to keep the rhythm interesting and keep the reader engaged.
but we all know, he will be alright, completing is objectives by any means possible.
Is he smart? Yes.
There are some other rare instances when someone elso also have “smart” moment. But are very rare. Women are stereotypically stupid or heavily emotionally driven, but like any emotionally driven being there, they will die, or maybe not, but defeated none the less, or simply explode in some way.
I’m not a fan, I don’t get the hype. I’m trying to be objective, but still, inevitably biased.
It’s overrated imo.
Among the other Xiangxia stories, yes, it’s one of the best among those.
But those stories are just…subpar.
Far from being the best novel outside that genre.
What happened?
Σ( ￣□￣||) why are the chapters of an shoujo romance got updated here?!
I’m starting to question what is a middle age man…because the protagonist is surely does not look like one.
Look like a teen age boy, because of course, he”s the protagonist.
The quality on the cover is not present in the content.
The body proportion seems to get squished in a bad way sometime.
And it’s just damn random.
Who wrote this really.
Tell the artist drawing to go do exercise and practice.
Because this story need to be rewritten anyway to be worth the effort of being illustrated.
And for the Lord’s Sake. get those young girls out of the romance radar
Here’s my two cents of opinions about this.
“Amelia the level Zero Hero”
The title is riding on the same wave of all the other like…”level 1 ranked” and similar stories.
Here it is relevant, yet not. And it make sense for the kind the story they are trying to tell.
There’s a ground of a good idea of a story.
I sort of like the protagonist, but, it lacks some depth.
This issue I directly tied to ONE of MAIN ISSUE, which are the dialogues.
They are a few alright exchange, but MOST OF DIALOGUES are not thought out enough, they lack a purpose, they lack and intention, they are repetitive, and some conversations seems want to say something, but they end up one sided and self conclusive. Pointless. Not even for jokes.
.
It repeats the pattern of “introducing the adversaries before their reality gets flipped upsidedown by the mc”.
And it’s the same as hearing the same sentence over and over, or just having the same soup all day everyday.
The struggle of the mc against the system are interesting, but the whole world and plot is just setting the mc up to be a Hero anyway. I mean, it’s implied in the title.
At this point, I believe the ultimate rebellion of the mc to break out of that fate imposed on her is to break the forth wall like Deadpool. (Would be funny)
But she won’t, because she does have that “hero” mentality.
It has potential. But who wrote the story, is clearly inexperienced.
The art is not bad, I give that.
Overall. This is a very very simple and linear story. And some action of some character, those too are not much thought out. Self absorbed conviction that have no regard of much else. Like the fight in ch.45… I don’t want to spoiler, but I want to bring up the memes about Dragon Ball where fights are in the desert and Western Superheroes that fights in cities.
Will I keep reading? Yes. I hope to see that potential that I feel to grow…
Will I be disappointed? I’m used to that at this point.
Reading comics is my favorite thing to do
There’s no agency in this… the drawings are good, but that’s it.
The story isn’t engaging at all.
I hope they cook up something to balance all the good.
Otherwise, this is another story of how life is doing from good to great of a very gifted and god chosen boy, love by everyone and can’t do wrong.
Even Jesus had Roman’s against him, dammit.
But I guess this is for some healing story, some projection of a life someone want?
But I can understand, I too fantasize to be a better person and have people love you.
Like anybody else.
And the “romance”? Why is always like this?
It’s not like a hate romance, it’s just, the portrait of such relationship are quite awful most of the time. And this is not starting well.
The story seems to be written by a child/teenager for now.
That said, this clearly not my cup of tea.
To be able to draw…always come with a curse.
I can’t unsee the long neck tags that holds the mc head like a cheap counterfeit Barbie doll on the cover.
Help.
I’m having flashbacks.
That single strand of hair in the middle of the forehead, that hairstyle is so alike, just the green eye ps instead of blue. And of course, different art style.
Still, not my cup of tea.
…have some SPOILER from the novel…
I can see the plot holes already in the early chapters…
My god. I have mixed feeling about this.
The harem is not a core part…
BUT all those woman…he gonna marry each of them, one at time.
Hear me out… it’s just a possibility, but DAMN
I can work. Their intention are on the line, no marriage with Ash, but alliance.
So…if in the future they meet…MAYBE. MAYBE IT CAN HAPPEN.
I know there are folks out there shipping Ash and Lukas, I can smell you, ya rotten folks
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That…that was actually a very fun puzzle.
Imma gonna do something similar for my dnd sessions—-