To be fair, this story was so confusing since the start that I'm not even surprised or disappointed by this ending. It follows the mood of the whole story x)
I know it's fiction but it always will threw me off when the trope is a beta/alpha turning into a omega.
Like, does it mean a fucking womb somehow grew into him ?? Or are everyone suppose to have a womb in the first place but only the omega's one can conceive a child? (for the men, I guess women would be able to no matter if they're alpha, beta or omega)
I guess mc already became Omega before now like a late manifestation but wasn't aware since he never retook the test and was probably a recessive Omega but thought he was a beta and went on fucking without knowing he is a Omega
Ig the assumption is in omegaverse, everyone has a uterus, just some of them turn on with pheromones or whatever... don't think too hard about it cause the author sure didn't.
Ig he had always been an omega, most likely a very recessive one. Since the beginning Jaehyuk has been saying he gave off a scent and also assumed he was an omega (ch 15).
I feel like I'm having a stroke while reading this translation, too bad because the story looks actually good
It bugs me the way Jaekyung will still kiss/makes inappropriate touches towards Kim Dan without warning first. There's definitely a problem in the evolution of Kim Dan's trauma about all the rape stuff. Because at first he was absolutely scared of Jaekyung and from his touch, and even if he turned more "chill" and all kind towards Kim Dam, all the sexual stuff initiated had still been kind of non con. Like, he would pounce on Kim Dam, kissing him and leading to sex, but never once did he ask for his consent or even warned him before doing it.
Yet, Kim Dam suddenly is somehow fine with it when he was absolutely terrified some chapters ago, it makes no sense. Like, if Jaekyung really respected Kim Dam and wanted to truly helps him and get redeem, he should always ask consent first, makes his intent clear and not starting thing out of nowhere to not stir up a breakdown from mc.
But yeah, with how the author doesn't know how to write good relationship (yes, even writing a romance that starts at bad but that is supposed to get better through time) I shouldn't expecting much from her.
There’s such a thing as doing too much. This right here is a good example.
Real
have you literally not been reading the story and how jae has changed, which prob makes kd less nervous? you people are insufferable
so after 88 chapters of this yaoi you were like “actually no im really not a big fan of this”
Nah they have a point tho
I can't believe you really think what JK did is enough to make Kim Dam who he abused so bad that he found himself in such a state that he turned alcoholic and suicidal enough that he's suddenly isn't nervous???
I pointed out a fair point, the way Kim Dam's trauma is dealed with is awfully bad and makes the pacing of the story weird. As someone who went through abuse, who had a lot of friends who went through abuse too, your own rapist suddenly acting a bit kind won't make you all okay with him initiating sex or intimate acts without asking for consent first. Especially in this story in which it was shown that Kim Dam still reacted badly about JK trying to have sex with him and being all anxious about it.
I hope you're just one of those young teenagers who still hasn't a clue about healthy relationship (because that's what the author is trying to do in this fic) because if you're a grown ass adult, it's low-key scary for you to think what's happening in this story is fine
I always disliked how the author wrote this story, made servals comment about it, and much people reading this fic all complained about the awful writing. But we were all eagerly waiting for the redemption arc and how it would be deal with, I was just litteraly stating how bad it was going on (on the writing aspect of it).
You guys needs to fucking chill out and stop feeling attacked each time someone makes a well deserved criticism. It's the story that I'm criticism not the people reading it for fuck sake
It might be a small detail, but I found it frustrating that zhenya is some kind of perfect human who is better at everything (talking about all the bet between him and Taekjoo). I know it's for showing how 'superior' and undefeatable he is, but instead it makes it impossible to like him in my opinion because nothing about him seems human.
Like, if Taekjoo managed to beat him at something (even if it doesn't help him to escape) and Zhenya was clumsy at it or something, it would make him a bit likeable (not that it would remove the fact that he's a black flag). But yeah, for now nothing in this story make me likes Zhenya even a bit.
I didn't read the novel so maybe I'll get surprised by the writing at some point, at least I hope so
Pero es idiota frente a su lindo Taekjoo
yeah the novel does some stupid asf bullshit where zhenya’s “only weakness is taekjoo”. idk why everybody eat up this plot where the top is some fucking boulder of a man that’s omniscient and deplorable until he falls in love like just say u like one dimensional characters w no substance no personality no nothing.
Un clásico! Top perfil heterosexual pero con lo que ahora está de moda y a mí me encanta! Es: pasivo con razgos heterosexuales, un hombre con músculos. Ambos con músculos
I swear the people in this bl are fucking stupid, I spend all the chapter screaming at Taekjoo to just shot this blond mother fucker
FOR FUCKING REAL.
he’s already tried that multiple times before he is really fast and can overpower tj in seconds. his only option is getting away
Are we deadass? if he had shot him he still wouldn’t have escaped either way
Does anyone know if the pace will keeping being slow or the relationship will evolve at some point? I love this story but it's a bit frustrating to wait for each new chapter and nothing much happening in it TwT
Kinda yes, it'll be slow, but later on na-in will start to show more interest in Gwen. Well Gwen is 2nd ml which is less probably endgame, but I've seen people say, Na-in will be in polygamy
MC is all tits no brain