And if I said this story is getting carried by the smut would I be killed? Mediocre writing, Low Stakes and the “chasing” arc was meh. But the smuts good so that’s a +
The story started with a threesome, it never had a deep twisted plot and the writing is actually really good considering most of the other stories have cliche chasing arcs or dumb af misunderstandins. Anyway, the moment yall start bit**ing about everything will be the moment the rest of us, plus the author, will finally get peace. Y'all ruin everything with ur entitlement masked as "constrictive criticism" and unwanted opinions
Not sure what mental illness you have but I never said the story was deep nor did I say it was twisted. Nor did I bitch about anything genuinely not sure what you have going on but you seem miserable. All I did was point out the stories writing wasn’t good and that’s ok. It’s ok for things to be mid like genuinely it’s a decently enjoyable story and somewhat easily digestible and that’s okay.
Damn chill, something can be all full 5 stars and be porn slop. I also enjoy stories that don’t make much sense or have much depth just like i love this one and im still unsure how good it will be since it’s still in it’s process. And tbh if i could i would totally support the author as much as I could cause i actually like this story all in all, but i am anxious and want the sex to get on to see what the f is going on in Nanjo’s head.
Also it’s kinda like a you thing to act like this is something to get so mad about, the generalization it’s uncall for for a mere comment and by the way this is a comment area my opinions are clearly wanted if i have the choice to write something lol











A damn mess