Those last 4 chapters ?????? The pacing was all over the place.. the random bath encounter felt forced and the nonce was just kind of shoehorned in as a way to forgive them..? The non-linear storytelling made everything feel rushed too and the lipbalm thing ?? What did they need that many for.. I thought they were gonna use it on their own lips not his










Renaming ur potential future boyfriend is crazy work what was wrong with Max the ethics here are a bit... if hybrids can't keep a name they're used to I don't think dating or marriage is on the table
this just overly dramatic now