What the f happened to the top, he's like a different character, I just skimmed through it but even considering that he was depressed, this is a 90 degree change. He's like an archetype uke right now in abusive relationship bls, he's crying during sex like he's the one being penetrated. The art even has to compensate the forced attitude change of the top, I want a yearning regretful tops but this ain't it, this is a whole new different personality.
I want to complain a bit that this arc is too damn long since I want them to return to earth since they have already overstayed their visit, I wanna see his school friends again. However this arc is still entertaining, and a necessary journey for the story, but damn I thought it's only gonna be a 20-30 chapters long arc but I think it's already been more than a hundred.
The concept of magic and their magic are so fresh, it's not just something like fire ball water ball etc concepts. Specially the comb magic is something else, and the needle and thread magic is so versatile—I hope she could learn how to heal severe wounds as well since she could with broken thiings, and later on hopefully the concept of her magic could fix more than just tangible. But how could Nona's mother fly with a broom if her magic has to do with comb. The wheel magic is something I've never seen before, the way the author thought of how to make it useful in this story is so interesting.
So so, 6/10, an ok read to pass time, but I didn't really enjoy the story. It is lacking in so many details, there are storylines that should have been answered from the start, example how many years exactly have passed since the emperor tried to conquer the white Tundra and how long since mc have lived for him to become the legend ashen barbarian in the history, it is said at the first chapter that the empire lost, but then the empire still exists. It wasn't even until many chapters that it is said that there are other barbarians outside of Tundra, so I was really confused because the story made it seem like barbarians are specifically only in the Tundra, also the story should have shown the other barbarians in the Tundra aside from the two others for an effective world building. We don't even know how big the Tundra, not even in passing, because the storyboard and the panelling didn't really do a good job, because in the chapters where Ketal met the mercenaries and the merchant girl, it seems like they just walk through the terrains then voila they're at the destination.
He's probably gonna write tons of books in the meanwhile
I really expected much because some comments said that worldbuilding is good but I'm on chapter 5, and this story isn't that detailed. 1st the lack of people after the protagonist bumped into the Noble's servant when supposedly they're in the market then they fought in the said market and there's no commotion, and 2nd when they infiltrates the quinan they were talking to each other whilst they were supposed to be in the presence of the staffs of the place, 3rd they suddenly go into the carriage where people were kidnapped and the guy seems to know that it's a recurring event but there's no explanation or background whatsoever. Good worldbuilding my ass. The protagonist is also kinda dumb, because what do you mean she's in a place unknown to her then there's a person, a local willing to help her, given that she's wary of him but in that situation instead of trying to kill the person who saved her she should have calmed herself at least, step back a little and ask very important questions for her survival since the person is willing to provide answers. Her common sense is also all over the place.
It's been so long since I've read something good that I didn't just drop it midway. I was hooked from start to current chapter.
Spoiler???
I'm guessing the 17th loop Tesilid we know of currently is actually the 100th loop Tesilid. So fl's timeline is actually the timeline after 99th Reed was imprisoned in the abyss. Tesilid will try to use Ailette to fall inlove with him to kill himself.
If the Marques kind of created the game like feature, why is there so much restriction for the supposed 'hope' or 'savior' to turn things around
It's good and entertaining, but there are really aspects that makes you scratch your head because it doesn't make sense, and some parts that is still not answered even at the end of each case. For example, the upside down woman, she's always been with the one she's looking for, then she goes to the mansion along with FL. The case of Jace, if the dark mage the one who cursed him then what was the motive?
I hope there's a happy ending for the real/original Cale
This is really lackluster, world building isn't sufficient and boring. I have read up to 50 chapters but I still don't know what's really happening, his powers or the others isn't even well explained, the first chapters says he can put fire and water in his sword, and didn't even mention that he can use all 4 elements. The flashbacks didn't give much information as to why he was hanged, just a vague explanation that the blame was put on him, or why he has to kill Kishair wasn't explained as well, and many other things. This thing is a cluster of vague and boring storyline, the power system aren't interesting at all, the training arc thingy he gave to the two people I didn't bother to remember the names was also disappointing. The leads has no chemistry at all, the supporting characters are bland and forgettable. The 9.5 ratings is a mystery.
Must the author really separate them after, tho it may be needed for their relationship since they were always together since
Yuuki becoming a vampire isn't the unexpected twist, the unexpected twist was that Yuuki was and is a vampire all along.