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the writing is awful they just tell you everything it’s a visual medium you can do a lot with just the art they keep spelling everything out for us like we are 6
Yk I lowk appreciate it tho the art is nice too so I can focus on that rather than having to piece everything together myself. The story is not flowing badly either, it has a consistent plot and goal so we’ll see how it plays out.
I don't know why it's awful for you but it's actually good We all have different preferences I guess.
its good for me the biggest issue is the lack of true conflict. theres no risky moments where the FL thwarts a plan just in time, or points where she doesn’t know exactly what the other side is planning, which makes the adversaries appear dumb and non threatening. theres never a point where i worry for the characters because they always seem one step ahead of the villains. the building collapse is really the only moment where the villains seem smart
I need to have all my old read, want, and reading stuff back it never got fully restored to me and I had like 500+ stuff in my read that I wrote reviews for and it’s all gone :(
OMG SAME! it's so irritating that one day 95% of my list got wiped. genuine heartbreak.
Anyone know if the serpents den is on here the one from lezhin with the blonde bottom it’s supposed to be really weird and gross and i’m curious
Are you perhaps talking about snake hole?
yes thank you and that name is so much worse ong
thank you? i’m not sure if reading it will be helpful to me lol but i appreciate you finding it and listening to my request ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Good luck reading it
Gurl
well did they?
Lmao. No. But the yearn is real!