the writing is awful they just tell you everything it’s a visual medium you can do a lot with just the art they keep spelling everything out for us like we are 6
its good for me the biggest issue is the lack of true conflict. theres no risky moments where the FL thwarts a plan just in time, or points where she doesn’t know exactly what the other side is planning, which makes the adversaries appear dumb and non threatening. theres never a point where i worry for the characters because they always seem one step ahead of the villains. the building collapse is really the only moment where the villains seem smart










Gurl
well did they?
Lmao. No. But the yearn is real!