I would like to say that in the scene when the baby moves when they are hugging, how far along is the uke? Because I was thinking that there is no way the "baby" is moving that early, especially when he isn't visibly showing. I looked dit up and they said earliest is 3 months but it's normally 4 to 5 months where it's actually noticeable to the pregnant person..
I like how they revised the some scenes a few times, not only to show both perspectives, but to reveal their inner thought relevant to how much we know in the story. Like when I first saw Juergen's (seme's) pov from when they first started seeing each other, I was still unsure if he played a bigger role in the world that Joachin (uke) worked in. Towards the end however, we see the same scene but what happened before to Juergin and what his true complete thoughts were. And we also seen the scene from the pov of Joachin and what happened to him before as well. Love this detail
Also, THE MOM IS A FUCKING BITCH...I HATE WHEN CHARACTERS THAT GET SO FUCKING ANNOYING ARE NOT GIVEN ANY KARMA AND ARE KINDA BRUSHED OFF. LIKE I KNOW SHES OLD ASF BUT FUCKKKKKKKK
that's it
2nd comment on this, like the couple all the other characters suck ass I hope that old hag and quack doctor die