This isn't bad art, in fact, it's really good art, but i got pretty confused with the storyline and feelings the characters express sometimes, as if there's no real direction this story is actually going in. In other words, its confusing and i can't figure out what's going on. I kinda stopped half way, because there was no developement (love wise). It was as if the author went "I want her with him!" and then suddenly changed, "No.....maybe she would be better with him.." and the direction of the story changed. At first it was a dark story, but then it became tjen it lost all the emotions, and in my iopinion, was what the story revolved around. A(╯°Д °)╯╧╧(╯°Д °)╯╧╧s if the emotions that should be felt at a certain time, were just deleted from the story. Though I really like the art.
In my opinion, the art style is shit...
WHAT HAPPENED. LIKE SO WAS THE THREAD REAL? SPIRITUAL? HOW DID THE OTHER GIRL SEE IT AFTER IT BROKE? LIKE WHAT????? WAS THAT AN ACTUAL THREAD? OR WHAT? I AM super confused @_@
u confuse me more.
You know, I think it didn't really break... I think her vision "Broke" and she can't see the thread nymore, because she doesn't need to anymore... ;-)
IN ALL SERIOUSNESS, if I had a boyfriend like this, he would probably make me really nervous, insecure and worried. If he ignored my warnings about potential boyfriend snatchers and waved it off smiling, then I might just like not trust him to take care of himself. He's the type that requires all of maintanence and all. And I might be crying or something very few minutes. But my point is that if I had this kind of boyfriend, that didn't really respect my opinions. Then it would make me super insecure at the hardest points in our relationship. Which eventually leads to our break up. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Anyone else have some opinions, or is it just me? (● ̄(エ) ̄●)
It's OK but I dislike how she just clings to him and cries, and while she's doing that he's with someone else. Like it would be nice if she said I hate you along the way or the guy would actually chase after her. Or something like the guy showing some love for her pr something. That kiss doesn't look like it has feelings attached to them on his part.For goodness sake the threats he made are sad, never say that to someone.... NEVER!!!(especially someone who likes you) I feel like he's taking advantage of her love for him and somewhat manipulating her.(at like 2 parts in the story you can actually get some hints that he may like her). ( ̄へ ̄)
There are more of this authors work under the name "Takagi" like the manga Hana ni Arashi is made by them, but written under a separate author title/name thing (takagi)