Wow I cried because of this argument, which could actually be considered small if they just communicated. Maybe it’s because I can understand both perspectives and already feel connection with these characters, but the author also wrote it pretty well. Everything connects and doesn’t feel like an superficial issue just to run the plot
It’s so well written that on some point I started wondering „is the author okay?????” Like genuinely
If you scroll down their instagram (I'm not too sure if it's still up its been like 3 years ago, i have screenshots though) There was a story originally instead of this it was a zombie AU, 10x worse not on a toxic level but dear lord there rough drafts were pretty depressing i think if they went with the original story line i wouldnt have been okay
Sorry for the mistakes I typed way too fast!
I've made a mistake it's different characters but still...
I rarely get to read something so bad even for pure smut. That doesn’t mean “bad” in a “the story is not unique enough” or “I don’t like the characters” kind of way (although both are true), but in “this is genuinely bad writing, you could see the author trying to make jokes or adding exaggerations where they shouldn’t, even the smut felt stupid”.
Can’t believe it but my heart skipped a beat more than once already?? Everything around the characters, their relationship and the situation they’re in is really well portrayed and engaging.
I missed feeling this invested within just a few chapters so let’s goooo—
It’s one of these things that is really badly written, the characters development is non existent and the overall plot is everything and nothing, but somehow you cannot stop reading it and even genuinely want more
It was really interesting UNTIL they went into a sexual relationship?
Besides the fact that one of them is a literal child and it gave me a huge „wtf” - this kind of thing wouldn’t even make much sense if he was a consenting adult.
Feels like the author just wanted to add some smut, which actually throws me more off
What was the author’s intention with this trashy ml? And I don’t mean his personality.
First it seemed like they wanted to make him a bad and abusive person, then as if the ml had a personality disorder, now around chapter 30 it seems they’re going with the yandere trope?
Hopefully they’ll decide on something soon enough
Oh you're new, hi and well-- he is too dimensional and complex to fit a single trope i guess ╮(￣▽￣)╭
By that I mean clever, as sly as one could ever be and straight up fucked in the head
Many might disagree here, but I really like how the author made their relationship to be more focused on a pretty nice friendship, rather than making them the obvious “future couple”.
We really don’t get this often and I’m super excited to see where it goes.
Can see people saying it gets better, or that a lot gets explained later on, but man tbh I don’t feel like anything could redeem the bottom for me. Man is annoying with everything he does or thinks, like please shut up and get therapy
He got raped when he was younger for being gay… that justifies his actions.