It’s so well written that on some point I started wondering „is the author okay?????” Like genuinely
If you scroll down their instagram (I'm not too sure if it's still up its been like 3 years ago, i have screenshots though) There was a story originally instead of this it was a zombie AU, 10x worse not on a toxic level but dear lord there rough drafts were pretty depressing i think if they went with the original story line i wouldnt have been okay
Sorry for the mistakes I typed way too fast!
I've made a mistake it's different characters but still...
I rarely get to read something so bad even for pure smut. That doesn’t mean “bad” in a “the story is not unique enough” or “I don’t like the characters” kind of way (although both are true), but in “this is genuinely bad writing, you could see the author trying to make jokes or adding exaggerations where they shouldn’t, even the smut felt stupid”.
Can’t believe it but my heart skipped a beat more than once already?? Everything around the characters, their relationship and the situation they’re in is really well portrayed and engaging.
I missed feeling this invested within just a few chapters so let’s goooo—
It’s one of these things that is really badly written, the characters development is non existent and the overall plot is everything and nothing, but somehow you cannot stop reading it and even genuinely want more
It was really interesting UNTIL they went into a sexual relationship?
Besides the fact that one of them is a literal child and it gave me a huge „wtf” - this kind of thing wouldn’t even make much sense if he was a consenting adult.
Feels like the author just wanted to add some smut, which actually throws me more off
What was the author’s intention with this trashy ml? And I don’t mean his personality.
First it seemed like they wanted to make him a bad and abusive person, then as if the ml had a personality disorder, now around chapter 30 it seems they’re going with the yandere trope?
Hopefully they’ll decide on something soon enough
Oh you're new, hi and well-- he is too dimensional and complex to fit a single trope i guess ╮(￣▽￣)╭
By that I mean clever, as sly as one could ever be and straight up fucked in the head
Many might disagree here, but I really like how the author made their relationship to be more focused on a pretty nice friendship, rather than making them the obvious “future couple”.
We really don’t get this often and I’m super excited to see where it goes.
Bro the fl is a grown ass woman but acts like a brat during most of the first part.
Also as fun it was, I still have no clue why the ml needed to be a freaking child? We literally seen him in school like twice and it didn’t bring anything to the story.
Also don’t get me started on how tf was she living her life that a stupid divorce brought her to the streets.
I know it was for the plot reasons, but if something is stupid then it’s just stupid
Ik right, like now doing hotel? What's the point of the first arc build up? Ffs
Well.. her circumstances were made to be extreme.. i can understand.. but ending up on the streets after the divorce was kinda likely in her case. She didnt wanna see the jerkass cheating ex husband, so of course she cant go back.. she got robbed and only got a few clothes on her suitcase.. and her only relative was an abusive father. She did consider taking out a loan so she could rent while looking for a job.. but remembering how her father ended up due to getting loans when she was young.. she didnt push through with it. She couldve stayed at a police station so she wouldnt be out on the streets.. but the police wouldve called either her cheating ex husband or her father to pick her up.. so that wouldnt fare well either.. i think her situation that time was well thought of considering what happened and how it played out. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Wow I cried because of this argument, which could actually be considered small if they just communicated. Maybe it’s because I can understand both perspectives and already feel connection with these characters, but the author also wrote it pretty well. Everything connects and doesn’t feel like an superficial issue just to run the plot