Although I agree that Mitsu shouldn’t be used as a way for Tate to get closer to Hachi, I also don’t want to see them together. I think they all would be better off with their own partners.
- Hachi and Mitsu: could develop from enemies to lovers BUT Hachi doesn’t actually love Mitsu, he worships him. Mitsu would need to be the one to put effort in the relationship as Hachi would be too scared and nervous to actually do something which could lead to them breaking apart
- Mitsu and Tate: icl it’s my favorite pairing in here, i can see the potential but i also think they would break apart if they got together as Tate would probably force himself into the relationship in order to not lose the friendship which would lead to Mitsu getting stressed about it and arguments
- Tate and Hachi: while there’s actually a possibility of genuine feelings developing between them I don’t like the idea of seeing them together. (I had more to say but I forgot, sorry)
If Tate and Hachi end up being endgame i can definitely see Mitsu somehow moving on and him and Tate staying friends (i’ve been disappointed by too many comics and they always ended like this so i dont have high hopes for this one either)
- If they become a throuple: it wont work unless some crazy character development happens.
can liam and derrick kiss (huge review incoming)
ok so the concept itself isn’t bad, it’s just the execution that bothers me. when i read the first chapters, i thought nox was some kind of dog or animal that knew yuri and was attached to him in his past life, hence the hugging and stuff. but then???? i don’t know, everything just feels messy. the author throws in a lot of things but in the end gives us nothing.
icl liam and derrick had way more chemistry than any of them had with nox. please, nox is basically a baby, can y’all leave him alone… anyway, i really hope they get together and leave nox out of it.
i was going to try to sympathize with derrick, but after seeing him touch nox while liam was fucking him, i had to reconsider. like, i understand him being hard after watching them since that’s a normal physical reaction, but all the stuff about him liking nox just threw me off. there’s no saving that, so i’m really hoping he realizes he doesn’t like nox and falls for liam instead.
liam is your typical manwhore and so far feels pretty dull since there’s nothing special about him (but honestly, none of them have anything special going on). that said, i really like the fact that he enjoys teasing others, and that’s one of the reasons i think derrick would suit him more. sorry, i might be projecting one of my favorite tropes here, but i really want to see liam tease derrick until derrick starts getting flustered and embarrassed.
yuri is also a freak, because why was he into whatever old nox was doing to him. i really hope he finds himself a good partner that ISN’T nox. i can somewhat understand him, though. and i don’t know if my analysis is correct, but i think the reason he’s so mad is because nox used to torment him and then one day just forgot about it. imagine someone abused you for a long time and then suddenly forgot and started acting nice. would you be happy? my thinking is basically: “you tormented me for so long and just forgot about it? am i supposed to forgive you because you don’t remember? and why are you acting nice now, is this a new way to harass me?” that’s why i think he’s mad. plus, the comments he makes about omega smells probably come from what nox used to do to him. which also makes me want him to end up with a beta or an alpha. but then again, he’s obsessed with becoming the heir, so he’ll probably just marry some omega. ok i got sidetracked, moving on. yuri was ok until the rut thing happened. i know ruts mess with your brain, but ummmm idk, it was just weird. i lowkey skipped it because i hated the things nox said and did. like ok, you might be an idiot, but that’s your brother. why are you doing that. did it seriously never cross anyone’s mind to just call an omega? y’all should learn a thing or two from liam. the encounter they had before that was also weird. why would nox meet him out of nowhere? at first i thought “holy shit, they’re plotting together, maybe nox isn’t as stupid as i think and he’s just pretending,” but then i was left completely baffled. what was that scene even for. it made no sense.
and as for nox, he’s really, really stupid. naive, innocent, you name it. he lets people take advantage of him so easily that i genuinely can’t shake the thought that he was a dog in his past life. aside from that, i was really hoping they’d focus more on why he’s like this, his past, and who he used to be, instead of giving us like eight chapters of him getting fucked. i don’t want to say he was raped like some people are saying, because he did give consent, but it still felt wrong because of his personality.
ok it’s late and my brain is begging me to sleep instead of reading random comics i come across. TT
i do like the art style though. honestly, the art might be the only reason i kept reading and hoped for better writing.











Can’t wait for more chapters (ノ≧∇≦)ノ