The story itself is super basic and cliche. You can already tell what's going to happen in the end, there's not much plot going on. The pacing is fast and the art isn't the most spectacular thing you'd come across. I can't really say anything else because there's nothing unique about the plot. You have your mc who has been reincarnated into a video game, you got your ml who doesn't have a personality except for being handsome, powerful and jealous over every thing that glances at mc, then you got the classic dynamic of refusing to admit that mc likes ml back, and then the jealous arc of mc seeing ml with other people, realizing he loves the ml, then they get together. And then the obnoxious smut. Honestly, I get the low ratings. If you're looking for something fast to read filled with cliche and not much thinking required, here you go.
I don't know if it's just me but everything seems so fast but not well written. I'm on chapter 16 and the main characters are already dating. We have the mc blushing when he met the ml, the ml thinking that mc is cute, then he rushes mc to the hospital where mc starts to think about his situation and seizes. The elements of a story is present but it's execution is just... Bad? I remember liking the beginning of the story but at some point in the middle I feel like the author didn't care anymore and just wanted to write the smut so they skipped writing the characters having actual chemistry. Right now I feel nothing. I get that they are physically attracted to each other but I don't see any qualities of them being in love (granted it's pretty early in the story still). The mc is kind of all over the place too. One moment he's serious and anxious about being in a novel, the next moment he's thinking about getting fucked by the ml and acting flustered. He thinks the ml will hit him sometimes due to past abuse, then he next he's completely fine. We're given some flashback implying that they knew each other, but it still doesn't erase the fact that they literally don't have chemistry. This isn't good writing.
Maybe I'm just sleep deprived while reading this but I could not get myself to like the mc. It is so blatantly obvious that the ml went back in time with her just from his actions alone (knowing her name, going to the south earlier to save her, etc) and yet she's confused and questioning herself. It was starting to grate on my nerves tbh. The typical story/art for this type of story was also not making me invest in the story. Idk. Maybe I'm just in a bad mood. I'll probably reread this again to see if I'm wrong but this is my review as of now. I stopped at ch. 9