...and tell me, if Nain eventually escapes this hell hole of a life with the pink haired guy? Bc I don't know if I can read further, if Nain just keeps suffering. :')
Are there side stories? Because I know of how they show reservation towards Nain when he returns and choose to stay by his side, but he never truly chose either of them as his last memory of them was pretty much "left for dead". There's no threescore or anything. He's surrounded by 4 people as the crowd celebrates his return.
What is up with those filler scenes? I don't care about those sword fights. We know who's going to win and going to lose. We know, Perez isn't going to fall in love with Ramona all of a sudden bc of one sword fight they had, he doesn't care about her. We don't need half a chapter of the empress making one stupid choice after another and the rest of the chapter being a sword fight without any relevance. Give us story development and not stuff we don't need to see...
Also, just because WE can surmise where things will lead to, characters can't do so at the same capacity that we can ('coz they don't have the omniscient viewpoint that we have)
Moreover, the context & reason as to why the events we think will happen may not be what we expect & that can greatly affect how we perceive the progress of the story.
Lastly, based on the other stories I read that didn't have these "filler scenea", the pacinf ended up wonky since everything ended up happening behinde the scenes
Context clues.
Tia agreed to help the brown family.
The brown family glory was their swordsmanship.
The brown girl had an important role in Tia past life.
If Tia is going to take the challenge her grandfather gave her to restore the brown family she’s going to use the only person in that family that already proved themselves worthy (even if this was in past life).
Which meant that this fight scene is shown so we could see Tia evaluate the girl strength and decide how to go from there.
That’s way Tia ask the twins and Perez to come/ they didn’t just pull up to casually fight they were asked to come.
(Also- for all we know the brown girl might pull a move next chapter that is a family secret or something and this was the preparation for it)
...but the female MC just pisses me off. Don't know why, but I'm kinda glad, I just read till chapter 15. And reading all of those comments, saying 3/4 of the chapters is just them having sex, makes me even more glad, that I dont have to waste my time reading this story.
Seems like the autor didn't have their wattpat era and wanted to write this mafia/pregnancy kind of story.
Wtf. Was JK raised by a bunch of dung beetles? Is he a psychopath?! How can he not have an inch of empathy in his body... And how can get this story any more shitty? I'm being disgusted by every new chapter all over again. But I just can't stop reading, since I already wasted time reading the previous chapters. ;_; What is this?
...so I'm gonna snoop around in your business and don't support your relationship, bc it's gonna be hard out here.
Like, what kinda excuse was that?! I understand here need/hope to make sure people she likes aren't alone/don't end up alone. But girl, you don't put your nose in other people's life. And you don't want to support them, bc it's harder to date as a same sex couple in the country side? That's a lame ass excuse. I'm so baffled right now, I don't know what to say. (⊙…⊙ )
...when I get chapters mixed up with one another and the names of various characters switched up so often, I get name-whiplash and can't remember which character was called what name. :) I really like that, couldn't imagine something like a good translation, consistent names and chapters which aren't cut up and smushed together with other chapters, so the reader gets confused.^^
Just, lovely...
I've had quite some stories, where names where changed but I've had it with this one. Every two chapters something or someone is called or pronounced differently and I have to wonder, who or what they're speaking about. How difficult can it be, to look at past chapters and just go with those names, instead of changing everything around constantly?! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I can bare with the mediocre translation, but if all the names of the characters and places are constantly changed, I don't want to read that story anymore... Definitely dropping this story.










I think I dropped this around chapter 40 and I recently saw some Instagram posts about them being a lovey dove couple. So I thought I'd check this out again but after reading only the latest chapter, it seems it's back to same old same old. xD