Somebody put a gun on the heads arthor and then said they have one more chapter left to finish the story. No cuz what
The heart break from this for the bottom is going to be a crazy expirience lol
Guys don't read, plot doesn't really make sense. There's rape even thought it click baited us that it wouldn't. The characters ain't even that pretty, the body propositions are actually insane. And in general not well written at all. You're unable to connect with the characters. Etc etc. Dropped
╥﹏╥ why are you looking to connect with characters in a mafia themed story....do you relate to mafia?!
Are u kidding me? No matter where a story is placed in the characters can be written well or written like shit. This one is clearly not for those who don't want to simply read brain rot mafia stories. And I commented on that. Even so, the story even for brain rot it's kind of shit cuz in my opinion the characters aren't good looking since the anatomy of them makes zero sense. They are TOO BIG. The artist in a lot of panels have chosen horrible perspective for them. They tend to look abnormal and BAD to the eye. Once in a while I want to take my comments seriously and not just type "big titties, ass plot", let me be ☹☹
╮(￣▽￣)╭ I'm just letting you know the reality of it. Its a mafia themed story. You know the mafia right? It ain't going to be pretty.
I didn't refute you on the art btw just how you said characters aren't relatable. So you don't need to rant about how the art work doesn't suit your tastes.
I don't mind the brutality, I'm just saying the characters are not written well. Why? Because they are putten in situations which first off don't add up with each other and second of all cuz most of the dialoge is ass. Why are u acting like porn can't be written well. This is one of the most disappointing mafia stories I've read. Like that's it
the setting of a story does not determine if the characters are relatable or not.
If the characters are well written and complex like real humans are- then they can be relatable, you can connect with them, you can emphasize with them, you can understand them.
these characters are not relatable because they are written like shit, not because its a mafia themed story lol
Omg thank you, you are an angel
I wouldn't go so FAR as to tell anyone not to read it just cuz of an opinion I would have. I mean that should be someone's choice if they wanna read this and see if they'd like to continue. Idk, you sounded very dramatic to me, I'm not attacking you so don't the wrong idea but that's how I feel.
It's alr, I mean if u wanna read it that's fine but some people(me as well) are more assertive with their speach and in all honestly I love being dramatic. So yeah lol
This reminds me of the comment Kanye did about tygas and kylies relationship where he said "I think he got in early" as in before kylie got other shit done and she will grow the way tyga wants kylie to be. Or at least that's how I understood it and that's what this reminds me of
Tiktok for the first time didn't disappoint. Historic moments
With all these cliffingers in Manga if I had a credit card I would be broke as shit buying chapters.
Making the rape victims feel "good" has to be stopped. I don't really care about the material insiside a story but let's not act it like we all haven't tried to hurry up our masturbation and go in DRY.
Are you a boy?
What kinda question is that. Acting like we all don't have a backstage hole. But no I'm a girl
im sorry but i laughed at backstage hole
No worries, I also laughed at backstage hole. But seriously what kinda question was that felt like I was tested, like do I need to beat up smbd
This was ass and after a certain point it was way too ass (still ate it up(