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kind of Interesting, it still have small chapters so i understand that it still can't answer the things i want to know. But anyway good plot and good art for now.
edit: I can't resonate with the story at all. It feels dead. I mean yeah good art, but the dialogue don't feel like they're characters at all. They're just like a wisp with text. I don't feel compassion with the mc with the revenge thing too. I will still try to read tho.
Author slow down. This feels so fucking fast we r still at chapter 10 and there is so many characters are getting introduce. You can't even get hyped cause you don't know them. Atleast take time to introduce them. It feels like i am reading a season 2 n shit. I don't know anything much about the other characters aside that he will help them cause they are 'comrades?' idr with his mother. But we are still leave in the shadow. We know nothing, but they still introducing a lot of characters, I don't even know what's their goal. Now, they're saying that maybe his mom is alive, like what? can we know his mothers story first before we got to that point? We just saw a breif intro and story. Who r the villains like what's the rising point that we gonna look forward too.
i feel like i just skipped half of content. Slow down. I love the story art plot etc tho. i just hope the author will take time to introduce characters and the past stories.
I don't think the pacing is fast. We're only ten chapters into the story and we're just meeting all of the main characters. It's relatively slow if you think about how little we know. A lot of manhua has been dedicated to fight scenes so far. We barely know the MC and his powers. I don't think introducing the mom's background completely now would have been effective either. She and her past are the big mystery of the series. We're learning about her at the same pace MC is. If we knew everything before he does, where's the fun of the story. Her whole arc would just be a giant spoiler for when the MC eventually learns everything
Nahh I'm not saying to drop it all. All i want is to keep it interesting to us. She could've atleast drop 1 comrade at a time then that one give a small overview abt their relationship with his mother. Then it will be puzzled together in the end. Like overshadow past or something. Or they can also just say something about the current situation. Them dropping a lot of important characters all at once and we don't even know why they're important.
Just like the mc we don't know anything and just anticipating to see his mother. We know nothing 10 chapters is still small but we are currently forced to swallow up all these characters without knowing anything. Bet maybe the first thing we will know is if his mom is alive before we get to know her.
I’m not sure, but hasn’t it already been explained who the MC is and why those people need to protect him?
I think the missing piece is the details of the prophecy, which might be too soon to reveal to the MC since it’s still at chap 10.
Regarding the backgrounds of the MC’s comrades, those can be introduced later as the MC gets to know them. Revealing this information before the MC meets them would seem forced.
Yes, it was mentioned clearly.
For the missing piece, that's why i said to slow down. Currently they already have shown a lot of characters even villains. And again we don't know what's their importance. Cause just like the fight shown where the villain said like he have that power why is the descendant of chuchu here' i want to know what about it. We just know it must be an incredible person, but how so. Could have said a little storytelling. Like eg. lin clan who have thunderous technique who was said to be able to perish anything it can come across was considered 3rd in the powerful list, yet was said that no one can be descendant anymore cuz of lack talent.// like that typa shit a little overview. That's what i wanted. It doesn't have to be a spoiler but gettin to know other character backgrounds. Making it more understable and interesting for us cause we can say that their powerful and hype em up and can lead us to theoriticalized the next fight.
I do agree it's fine it's just i feel like im reading a season 2 cause of they still haven't know who those are. But we just know they're part of the plan and powerful. We don't why tho.
But i do overall love the plot and the art.