Author slow down. This feels so fucking fast we r still at chapter 10 and there is so many characters are getting introduce. You can't even get hyped cause you don't know them. Atleast take time to introduce them. It feels like i am reading a season 2 n shit. I don't know anything much about the other characters aside that he will help them cause they are 'comrades?' idr with his mother. But we are still leave in the shadow. We know nothing, but they still introducing a lot of characters, I don't even know what's their goal. Now, they're saying that maybe his mom is alive, like what? can we know his mothers story first before we got to that point? We just saw a breif intro and story. Who r the villains like what's the rising point that we gonna look forward too.
i feel like i just skipped half of content. Slow down. I love the story art plot etc tho. i just hope the author will take time to introduce characters and the past stories.
kind of Interesting, it still have small chapters so i understand that it still can't answer the things i want to know. But anyway good plot and good art for now.
edit: I can't resonate with the story at all. It feels dead. I mean yeah good art, but the dialogue don't feel like they're characters at all. They're just like a wisp with text. I don't feel compassion with the mc with the revenge thing too. I will still try to read tho.
he just casually said his name like they are close or something idk its embarrassing. Also the mc is a peaople pleaser as we see. hmm what more? I hope he won't be a pushover or something or like ml chaser cuz he's a fan and have like 'U're good u're passionate about baseball why u quitting', like they know the other person their whole life.
Could be that, or he will be stunned and won't care at all(2% possibility). Or he will be mad and disappointed with the impression
Either way i would still probably read it whatever gonna happen.
damn it's good.
First of all, the character designs are very beautiful. Every characters have their own uniqueness and personality too. I'm glad that it wasn't mc centered and showed other characters pov in some panels. I also love how every character have an important role in the story and always connected, because most of the stories now are just mass release without any proper planning and just going through the flow. Just as i almost be disappointed cause i thought they abandoned character(like forget a character), they actually just show up in the next chapter. lol. In summary, I love how everyone is written gorgeously, my eyes and mind were blessed
Second, story plot really thickening. Somehow, he is very connected to spirits. The snake and the horse even maybe the whisper it may be a spirit. I'm really curious abt the whispers identity. At first in the Alicia's house or something, the first code was mentioned, i thought it might be whispers identity since it was also mentioned that it was familiar to the place. But if they are making it as a foreshadow i would be really disappointed, because that would be predictable. But somehow I don't think it is the case tho, it also maybe connected to the dragons, the fragments are scattered. What could've been the case? The whisper shouldn't be a dragon, cuz he have swordsmanship. Maybe he is the cause of the dragon fragments to scatter?... Cursed mages. godwin, george, dragon fragments, whisper, etc i would anticipate to the day this, all of this are connected.
Third, some things I don't understand. When the duel in the place of Alicia, it was very off. Why are they fighting insinde? It wasn't a duel ground or training ground too. A major damaged could've been inflicted to the place or to the people present. They are all knights. And i didn't understand much in that arc, i didn't understand much how the code works and why it worked in their favor.
In summary, i love the story. I hope this wouldn't be on hiatus and when back it will have ugly ass art. I hope they will end season one with 70+ chapter.
Why can't an action manwha atleast not have 2 or more potential fl. Jennica is already enough u don't need to make the merchant a potential fl too. She could've just be a business friend or something. I hope lucy won't be a potential fl too err, she just feel like a child being taking care of.
Anyways the story is goood. But i wanted to see the other characters progress too just like taylor, i wanna be updated. But yeah its fine, i think they just want to focus on the arc more. I love the characters too, yet also i hope we get to see a more student like parts? Bcs it only shows the details of the arc and him building his own house. There where no lectures or anything that he is learning from. Well anyways still quite good, hated the fact that they made the merchant potential fl tho, feels kind of unnecessary.
I'm back here again. I always check on this because maybe there will be a side chapters. I really love this story. The dialogue and the way the author portrayed the characters are very beautiful. Also, she have a knack on writing shitty ass characters lol. I love those shitty ass characters tho. I've been following this story so I don't remember much scenes in the story now and I can't even re-read it bcs i just can't go through it again, I'm a coward you see. All i can do is hope for sides.
When i knew that the last chapter was uploaded, I can't even bring myself to read it. I've delayed it for months, but just recently i finally have the courage to read the end of it. I was like a proud parent seeing my children grow and be finally happy. I was very into it, I don't know when or how did i get attached this much when i don't even remember much.
Crazily, i know that i hated this story but i still proceed to the story but maybe at one point in between dialogues it must've made me feel with them. The author executed the story perfectly. The pace, the emotions, the dialogues, and many more. I am glad to read such story. Tho I'm sorry to the author that i cannot support them in the original platform. I will wish them well(づ￣ ³￣)づ
That was quite good. Art was beautiful and the plot is actually kind of simple. I actually expected more complex plot and i was wishing vx and black to be different person (Which i know very well it wasn't, it was obvious) just so it can be more complex. Tho i think the author made it that way so the romance will go straight through the line and no second male lead to worry about. The characters are very cute, tho i hope they can increase other characters screentime too. I am actually very curious about the team zeta, like when did it start, or the name of the other characters (real life names), how all of them meet, etc.
Also i was actually expecting to learn a few things about programming or hacking. Not necessarily specific, but i wish they would elaborate the broker, etc. things in terms of their jargon. Like how does it work and all. The server attack and defend and all. Oh i would also love to know about their game too idr the name. That game that ranks them. I would be lying if i said i wasn't disappointed. But i really love the romance i was just sad that they didn't get to introduce the programming n hacking. Tho maybe it was made like that to make it simple to the readers.
I love it tho, wish the characters best ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
When he was talking abt his dead master it made me teary the delayed grief hit was really sad. It was so genuine
It's not as interesting as i thought. I stopped at chap7 and i can say I don't like it. Art is good characters r kind of good but the plot is kind of bad?... The first chapter got me hooked but the next r uhh i don't like it.
From what i can see it has great potential but i think it mainly focus on the mc. only mc. I thought i will be seeing girlboss fight. But she was lazy, i mean yeah it's fine if it's her character but the lack of goal and sympathy doesn't feel right to me. It didn't even explain her powers yet. I will assume currently that she can alter reality by using the book and it was given by the star guy and she was the cause of regression of that one guy or should i say that star. Her personality is kind of annoying too, like ur at other persons house that didn't even invite u and u try to be rude? ur not even thankful. Yet the characters don't even bat an eye to that kind of personality. They don't scold her and just let it go. She is kind of arrogant, could be good personality if it was written on other specific scenarios. Her arrogant personality is not what i want to see on those scenes. I don't feel the story at all. It's like an self insert au of the author.
i was binge reading this today and i hate the fact that he still didn't tell that grand commander to be a tailor like that's her dying wish can't u tell her. Anyways i feel bad for sarante he was such a good guy and probably know a lot of information too. Why didn't he tell the mc tho if he knew his death is near. So frustrating.
why are their brothers have brother complex. I kind of don't like tong yangs brother. Cries but doesn't even try to improve himself for his brother.
I don't know why i love this story that i can even still re read it for the 3rd time. Honestly i don't remember much anything everytime i reread the story. I am srsly glad i have a memory of a goldfish. To feel the same feeling that it gave me before is honestly a bliss.
tf u mean runnin away i thought he's planning to end himself i was shook