kind of Interesting, it still have small chapters so i understand that it still can't answer the things i want to know. But anyway good plot and good art for now.
edit: I can't resonate with the story at all. It feels dead. I mean yeah good art, but the dialogue don't feel like they're characters at all. They're just like a wisp with text. I don't feel compassion with the mc with the revenge thing too. I will still try to read tho.
he just casually said his name like they are close or something idk its embarrassing. Also the mc is a peaople pleaser as we see. hmm what more? I hope he won't be a pushover or something or like ml chaser cuz he's a fan and have like 'U're good u're passionate about baseball why u quitting', like they know the other person their whole life.
Could be that, or he will be stunned and won't care at all(2% possibility). Or he will be mad and disappointed with the impression
Either way i would still probably read it whatever gonna happen.
wait the word people please is wrong, you know like the righteous typa guy(They are the only one who thinks it's right). Like earlier which he sided at the ml, which i think he did cuz he recognized him. Or he really just doin it for the benefit like it means they will have a pro in their team.
damn it's good.
First of all, the character designs are very beautiful. Every characters have their own uniqueness and personality too. I'm glad that it wasn't mc centered and showed other characters pov in some panels. I also love how every character have an important role in the story and always connected, because most of the stories now are just mass release without any proper planning and just going through the flow. Just as i almost be disappointed cause i thought they abandoned character(like forget a character), they actually just show up in the next chapter. lol. In summary, I love how everyone is written gorgeously, my eyes and mind were blessed
Second, story plot really thickening. Somehow, he is very connected to spirits. The snake and the horse even maybe the whisper it may be a spirit. I'm really curious abt the whispers identity. At first in the Alicia's house or something, the first code was mentioned, i thought it might be whispers identity since it was also mentioned that it was familiar to the place. But if they are making it as a foreshadow i would be really disappointed, because that would be predictable. But somehow I don't think it is the case tho, it also maybe connected to the dragons, the fragments are scattered. What could've been the case? The whisper shouldn't be a dragon, cuz he have swordsmanship. Maybe he is the cause of the dragon fragments to scatter?... Cursed mages. godwin, george, dragon fragments, whisper, etc i would anticipate to the day this, all of this are connected.
Third, some things I don't understand. When the duel in the place of Alicia, it was very off. Why are they fighting insinde? It wasn't a duel ground or training ground too. A major damaged could've been inflicted to the place or to the people present. They are all knights. And i didn't understand much in that arc, i didn't understand much how the code works and why it worked in their favor.
In summary, i love the story. I hope this wouldn't be on hiatus and when back it will have ugly ass art. I hope they will end season one with 70+ chapter.
I also thought it was odd they fought inside. Perhaps it was some sort of inside training hall?
About the knight code, from what I gathered you're not supposed to bring harm to a "budding flower/flower in bloom" in other words you cannot harm/deter a knight that is about to awaken their aura. The code means that you are to nurture and help them come about to their fullest potential. You are to guide them. Hence when Vlad was dueling that knight, the knight wasn't able to cut down Vlad. Doing so would have either damaged or deterred his "world"/aura from awakening and would have broken knight code. Knights who awaken their aura aren't that common, even more so at Vlad's age, so it was an even bigger reason. The King himself set up this code/law. So going against it would have ALSO gone against the King himself.
That actually make sense. Thank you so much.
Why can't an action manwha atleast not have 2 or more potential fl. Jennica is already enough u don't need to make the merchant a potential fl too. She could've just be a business friend or something. I hope lucy won't be a potential fl too err, she just feel like a child being taking care of.
Anyways the story is goood. But i wanted to see the other characters progress too just like taylor, i wanna be updated. But yeah its fine, i think they just want to focus on the arc more. I love the characters too, yet also i hope we get to see a more student like parts? Bcs it only shows the details of the arc and him building his own house. There where no lectures or anything that he is learning from. Well anyways still quite good, hated the fact that they made the merchant potential fl tho, feels kind of unnecessary.
oh wait shit it have a harem tag didn't see it srry
But you can not lie it's really good for some reason
... actually, yes.
It's not good, sis, it's cliche as hell. After RIM and that harry potter manhwa (mage something, I gprgpt the name), this feels like copypaste
I'm back here again. I always check on this because maybe there will be a side chapters. I really love this story. The dialogue and the way the author portrayed the characters are very beautiful. Also, she have a knack on writing shitty ass characters lol. I love those shitty ass characters tho. I've been following this story so I don't remember much scenes in the story now and I can't even re-read it bcs i just can't go through it again, I'm a coward you see. All i can do is hope for sides.
When i knew that the last chapter was uploaded, I can't even bring myself to read it. I've delayed it for months, but just recently i finally have the courage to read the end of it. I was like a proud parent seeing my children grow and be finally happy. I was very into it, I don't know when or how did i get attached this much when i don't even remember much.
Crazily, i know that i hated this story but i still proceed to the story but maybe at one point in between dialogues it must've made me feel with them. The author executed the story perfectly. The pace, the emotions, the dialogues, and many more. I am glad to read such story. Tho I'm sorry to the author that i cannot support them in the original platform. I will wish them well(づ￣ ³￣)づ
That was quite good. Art was beautiful and the plot is actually kind of simple. I actually expected more complex plot and i was wishing vx and black to be different person (Which i know very well it wasn't, it was obvious) just so it can be more complex. Tho i think the author made it that way so the romance will go straight through the line and no second male lead to worry about. The characters are very cute, tho i hope they can increase other characters screentime too. I am actually very curious about the team zeta, like when did it start, or the name of the other characters (real life names), how all of them meet, etc.
Also i was actually expecting to learn a few things about programming or hacking. Not necessarily specific, but i wish they would elaborate the broker, etc. things in terms of their jargon. Like how does it work and all. The server attack and defend and all. Oh i would also love to know about their game too idr the name. That game that ranks them. I would be lying if i said i wasn't disappointed. But i really love the romance i was just sad that they didn't get to introduce the programming n hacking. Tho maybe it was made like that to make it simple to the readers.
I love it tho, wish the characters best ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
When he was talking abt his dead master it made me teary the delayed grief hit was really sad. It was so genuine
Author slow down. This feels so fucking fast we r still at chapter 10 and there is so many characters are getting introduce. You can't even get hyped cause you don't know them. Atleast take time to introduce them. It feels like i am reading a season 2 n shit. I don't know anything much about the other characters aside that he will help them cause they are 'comrades?' idr with his mother. But we are still leave in the shadow. We know nothing, but they still introducing a lot of characters, I don't even know what's their goal. Now, they're saying that maybe his mom is alive, like what? can we know his mothers story first before we got to that point? We just saw a breif intro and story. Who r the villains like what's the rising point that we gonna look forward too.
i feel like i just skipped half of content. Slow down. I love the story art plot etc tho. i just hope the author will take time to introduce characters and the past stories.
I don't think the pacing is fast. We're only ten chapters into the story and we're just meeting all of the main characters. It's relatively slow if you think about how little we know. A lot of manhua has been dedicated to fight scenes so far. We barely know the MC and his powers. I don't think introducing the mom's background completely now would have been effective either. She and her past are the big mystery of the series. We're learning about her at the same pace MC is. If we knew everything before he does, where's the fun of the story. Her whole arc would just be a giant spoiler for when the MC eventually learns everything
Nahh I'm not saying to drop it all. All i want is to keep it interesting to us. She could've atleast drop 1 comrade at a time then that one give a small overview abt their relationship with his mother. Then it will be puzzled together in the end. Like overshadow past or something. Or they can also just say something about the current situation. Them dropping a lot of important characters all at once and we don't even know why they're important.
Just like the mc we don't know anything and just anticipating to see his mother. We know nothing 10 chapters is still small but we are currently forced to swallow up all these characters without knowing anything. Bet maybe the first thing we will know is if his mom is alive before we get to know her.
I’m not sure, but hasn’t it already been explained who the MC is and why those people need to protect him?
I think the missing piece is the details of the prophecy, which might be too soon to reveal to the MC since it’s still at chap 10.
Regarding the backgrounds of the MC’s comrades, those can be introduced later as the MC gets to know them. Revealing this information before the MC meets them would seem forced.
Yes, it was mentioned clearly.
For the missing piece, that's why i said to slow down. Currently they already have shown a lot of characters even villains. And again we don't know what's their importance. Cause just like the fight shown where the villain said like he have that power why is the descendant of chuchu here' i want to know what about it. We just know it must be an incredible person, but how so. Could have said a little storytelling. Like eg. lin clan who have thunderous technique who was said to be able to perish anything it can come across was considered 3rd in the powerful list, yet was said that no one can be descendant anymore cuz of lack talent.// like that typa shit a little overview. That's what i wanted. It doesn't have to be a spoiler but gettin to know other character backgrounds. Making it more understable and interesting for us cause we can say that their powerful and hype em up and can lead us to theoriticalized the next fight.
I do agree it's fine it's just i feel like im reading a season 2 cause of they still haven't know who those are. But we just know they're part of the plan and powerful. We don't why tho.
But i do overall love the plot and the art.