Demon King of Salvation's Topics (25)

the beginning was litterally so good up until maybe like 70 chapters in until they ruined everything i feel like once she took Astair's eye and the time skip happened, all the character from astair was gone, especially his relationship with Ritaus or how he liked Kyla bc she could understand him. I'm also mad that it litterally says that Kyla forgets about her brother at the end, or that she hadn't thought of him since the time visiting him like ??? he was her motivation for the entire beginning of the story, and how Franz was also pushed off to the side post time-skip. The ending seriously made me mad because it took all the interesting part of the stories, ruined them, and skipped over so many details.

for 30 chapters i actually enjoyed how it expanded on their past during highschool and i think it really added to the story, even though I wish they wrapped things up with the neighbor better bc i totally forgot they kissed until i saw another comment. all in all pretty good especially with the face sitting people need to include that more

anybody who read the novel can you tell us if this was actually the ending that was written why is it so rushed ╥﹏╥

just in the first place i have no idea what happened in the end whether it was the uke getting reincarnated or the one that ran into jehee right at the end?? the parallel universes i can accept, but everything else was so rushed and i could've sworn that jehee was regressing to save the uke but i suppose not?? even when the uke died i thought he had a plan in place because the boss didn't feel like the main thing that they were supposed to be building up to like there should be something after that.

oh my god dalton don't look at me like that im wettt holy shit

GOD FORBID CROCHETTA HASNT LOST THE LAST BIT OF HER HUMANITY AFTER YOUVE KIDNAPPED HER, DRUGGED HER, AND TRIED TO KILL HER HUSBAND. WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU MEAN IM GOING TO USE THE LIFE TOUVE GIVEN ME TO TAKE YOU BACK JUST DIE

honestly the very abrupt ending is kind of in line with the rest of the story i js feel more bad that jarn has to live without fenrir esp bc im not even sure if jarn likes the other guy?? maybe he does but like now what happens.. i wanna know..

honestly the length isn't even the problem for me, in my opinion, her mom's backstory was probably the best part, but i feel like i have no idea what her plan is anymore. the plot isn't developing, like she's been making progress in knowing what happened w her brother but i feel like she's not doing anything with it?

somehow while having a 67 joke and a ridiculous amount of dick jokes theres also the underlying plot of fenrir EATING THE GRAND DUKES BODY TO BECOME HIM LIKE A FREAKING ANALOG HORROR AND CONSUMING THE WORLD TO TURN BACK TIME AND EVERYBODY HAS THESE WEIRD DEJA VU MOMENTS BECAUSE THEY CAN ALMOST REMEMBER

honestly, the entire thing is extremely cliche, the characters aren't that interesting or likable, it didn't feel like there was a lot of chemistry between the two of them either, and the entire plot feels pretty rushed. all of the conflicts or events happened quickly and ended quickly.