Literally just showed few frames to my partner, u all, they dont know story, but now they are crying too, that's how well the emotions are written here
Art is good and they was so cute as kids, loyal and strong. I would love to read about these characters. They actual adults versions are so off especially dark guy is awful and boring (always same rapist-dickhead ML) what a waste, they could be power couple but they must be another predator-victim duet. Thats poor writing and also boring as hell. （￣へ￣）
Thar size/proportions errors are giving me headache. kid is literally the size of ML's foot what is bad enough but ok, i get it its rare that anybody is able draw kid who look like kid and not some kind of retarded chibi. I can take it, it is not the worse i saw here. But this foot-sized gremlin is 3x bigger in the next frame aaahhhhhh. It really drive me out od immersion each time.
That would be nice if we could get some more animals huh? That rabbit guy looked like he had potential.
I genuinely like artstyle but proportions are so off lately. I get size difference kink but at this point they look like different species. That hand bigger that MC whole head etc
This plug is tiny, after everything that's been done something that small would have slipped out before he even woke up lol
Anyway it become so boring. How you manage to make something this fucked up and so boring at same time
The story is good, but I think the author definitely went overboard with the abuse part. There was too much of it and it was too fetishized for the story to work properly now. An editor would be helpful, who would read it, cut out a lot, tone down some of it, and maybe give Dan a bit more character, give Yoo more depth, and it would be perfect.
eh, why does every bdsm thread, out of a million options, have to be reduced to playing dog and peeing in corners? :/
There is literally nothing bdsm in it, why there is that tag
I wish Dick have diff hair color. He is fine but that yellow is ugly
The art is so good omg, it make it sooo hot even if i dont exactly like bulky type of guys or breasts but at this point this dont even matter. I never before seen porn drawn this good it is super effective??!!
I dont have issue with how fucked up it is, but i have issue with how boring it is
I know I'll get hate for this, but heart is so annoying... it could be cute if he and Wiktor were close, but he doesn't want him, there's no reason for him to act so clingy and pathetic. Like, dude… maybe stop trying to corner him and force yourself on him for at least five seconds. Out of all of them, heart is the least likely to listen to what victor actually says and the only thing he cares about is his own crush. They're all toxic, and so is heart, just in a more manipulative way. Which, from a story perspective, makes sense and is even interesting, but I can't stand how everyone in the comments is acting like he's some kind of innocent, sweet little cookie meanwhile what he does is classic lovebombing. I feel suffocated just from reading about how he behave and i am surprised Victor don't lash out on him yet.
All that fake updates are worse than this plot lol
For these waiting for romance, you can stop, there wouldn't be any. This is bromance at best.
