Art is good and they was so cute as kids, loyal and strong. I would love to read about these characters. They actual adults versions are so off especially dark guy is awful and boring (always same rapist-dickhead ML) what a waste, they could be power couple but they must be another predator-victim duet. Thats poor writing and also boring as hell. （￣へ￣）
Thar size/proportions errors are giving me headache. kid is literally the size of ML's foot what is bad enough but ok, i get it its rare that anybody is able draw kid who look like kid and not some kind of retarded chibi. I can take it, it is not the worse i saw here. But this foot-sized gremlin is 3x bigger in the next frame aaahhhhhh. It really drive me out od immersion each time.
he's literally like huge, it's not an error, the mountain man is just huge
He is but sizes still very to much frame to frame. And its not just him, every character who is manly is hilariously big here. People dont have as much dismorfizm between healthy adults. In some frame his palm is bigger than mc's whole head.
And its not only them. That flower? Frame 1 its Mountain man palm sized, next when mc hołd it or is suddebly 1/4 size. And dont let me start about that horse from like 2 chapts. I genuiely enjoy art style but autor have some seriously problem with proportions object-to-object and it bothers me when i read. Maybe because I also draw, it's more noticeable to me than others, I don't know. I think it's because of a hurry. If I remember correctly, the early chapters were drawn more carefully in this regard.
That would be nice if we could get some more animals huh? That rabbit guy looked like he had potential.
rabbit? you mean Q? he's a pig, though...
With an appendage
No no, i mean random background rabbit guy #1 xD
I genuinely like artstyle but proportions are so off lately. I get size difference kink but at this point they look like different species. That hand bigger that MC whole head etc
yeah same here, when mc was standing next to the horse it looked like either the horse was monsterous or he was just pocket sized
This plug is tiny, after everything that's been done something that small would have slipped out before he even woke up lol
Anyway it become so boring. How you manage to make something this fucked up and so boring at same time
Literally just showed few frames to my partner, u all, they dont know story, but now they are crying too, that's how well the emotions are written here