The author's favorite trope is to have Lily run off somewhere without permission repeatedly. What perplexes me is outside of that reoccurring choice...this series is very good. I've been over here bawling over various plot points.
There are some issues for me tho:
The characters feel believable and do learn...but still feel static though.
Also free my boy Edgar. All anyone cares about is Lily and talks about how charming she is. Lily has grown on me but nah, it's team Edgar for me. He is starting to get some love but it pales in the love and attention Lily is inundated with....it's honestly annoying. It's not as bad as some series but still tiring.
How did they write this story so well but so poorly?
They took a cliche plot and made it enjoyable which takes skill.
But then injected it with the cringiest nails on a chalkboard dialogue and plot points.
Its also very rushed but that rarely bothers me because sometimes you dont have time for a full meal, you just need a hot pocket.
I also am not a fan of this art style but it does it job.
Feeling mean today so here's some thoughts.
She seems to be chomping at the bit to forgive most, not all, eveyone in this godforsaken story.
We've got so many tropes and arcs that this really feels like one piece for girls.
The moral of this story is really don't be born from the wrong mom.
I hate it, but I'm gonna read it all though because its also kinda somewhat good. This upsets me.











Not sold on mc...he's written with some of my personal pet peeves but nothing too horrendous, but I really like the ml.