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Personally i liked it, but guys stop dissing the art i get the story is a bit stiff and the characters, i feel like it just lacked execution. Criticism is better than giving hate comments. “Its not hate comments” it clearly is
Agreed. It’s a chill story and that was one made clear from the start. They could’ve dropped it if they didn’t like the art. I don’t love the character design either but the character interactions, things not said and landscape are the focus here.
I personally think jingi and mc is decent, BUT idk why the back of my head wants Heonjae and Mc to end up tgt… like somehow, i get why Heonjae is like that and i can see him try..also idk i just dont like it when Jingi fucks alot like even in front of someone it irks me.. i also get why ppl think that Heonjae is creepy and stuff, he lwk is, but also…i lwk dont rlly care..? Like not that im brushing it off, but am i missing some key areas here? Cus i really like Heonjae better… its like the same way i like Jo more in WetSand which i dropped bc he wasnt the endgame. I’d probably drop this if any of them were the endgame. Acceptable for me is Heonjae being the endgame or neither of them as long as the mc is able to live freely. Or everyone’s problems are lesser than what is is now.
Something about Heonjae just makes me want him to live better and deserve better. Idk guys, am i gonna get jumped in the comments? Like everytime i try to convince myself just incase Jingi might be the endgame, it just falls right off when they start fucking out of nowhere like…ond Mc taking it like a champ tho..it sounds like im putting this all on Jingi but Mc lwk want that..
Anyway yeah overall, i’d say this is genuinely an interesting read, i hope his little siblings will be happy. Who’s team Hyeonjae..? haha me and 3 others?..
No I'm literally the exact same I know they're equally fucked up, but there's a tender bone in Heonjae's body that Jingi doesn't possess. Like you gotta seriously love someone to kiss their vomit-covered mouth.
Heonjae is genuinely so sweet but lwk in the creepiest way, he deserves someone who matches his freak (like me)
Problem with Heonjae is that he is a genuine psychopath. He has little to no control over his violent tendencies. He attacks someone with a scissor in high school for talking smack and then cries and says he started it. He cuts off the leg of his PE teacher who financially cheated him and is shocked when the now leg-less guy spits venom at him in the court room. He genuinely expects the guy to still care about him after he cut off his legs. He attacks people even in prison for exposing his past. He sees no problems with doing these things as long as Myeongil doesn't find out. He has no moral compass. I posted this earlier today - https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/prison_dogs/uu/br_chapter-221819/pg-17. That is not cute. That should be terrifying.
Oh... and him crying and saying "like me too" when Myeongil was checking on Jingi because Heonjae just STABBED him almost to death. You just tried to kill your brother and you are crying that someone checking on the guy who almost died is unfair to you? And right after that Myeongil sends that psycho to his family with his old grandmother and 2 young siblings. He has some issues too.
Holy shit I completely forgot about that
Oh let me give you a fucking kiss, THANK YOU this is all the heonjae supporters seem to bypass?? Like??? WHAT, he’s a fucking nutcase, there’s no way for him to be normal since he never was from a young age, jingi’s case is a case of the environment changing him. ANYONE wouldn’t be the person they were before jail after having been there for 9yrs, hell even mc changed, cuz wtf is he thinking sending someone who JUST stabbed their brother to his younger siblings and grandmas place?? I still can’t comprehend it and im fucking pissed at him, and what if their uncle finds heonjae and puts the kids in danger?? Anyways, this means Jingi can still change for the better once he’s in a better environment and that’s why I’m team jingi, but again heonjae? He’s doomed
Exaclty why did that dumbass give Heonjae his address after literally seeing him stab someone
After reading the responses, u guys opened my eyes HAHAHAH i kinda still like Heonjae?? But more like i dont want him to end up either the MC so both of the brothers should just get their mental illness checked cus none of them are passing with the MC dude
I want to give major props to you for what you wrote. It takes a lot of maturity to reconsider an opinion you already formed and update your priors. Seeing your post made me super happy.